I really liked this chapter. I think this story is pretty good so far and the updates are timed perfectly. Too much updates can be boring and too little can be agonizing :)
Wow, you're seriously an amazing writer. I really enjoyed this chapter. It helped me understand Jaime's condition more. I can't wait for the next chapter :)
YAY, glad to know I help I really like how descriptive you are, it makes the story fun to read But its also kind of scary how good you are at describing a of this ._. Well I really look forward to the next chapter :)
I think that the different perspectives are goo for the begining of the stories. I actually like it a lot. When you're coming closer to the middle of the story it should probably focose on Vic. I love that you made Jaime have ADHD, I think it's perfect. I'm really enjoying this story so far :) HOPE I HELPED A LITTLE :D
Awwww it makes me feel special that you liked my advice. I think Austins obsession with Alan was well played out. ASDFGHJKL I'm fangirling because I love Austlan Cashby :)
Very good so far. I like how you were vey discriptive but not boring. Its been getting hard for me to find good fics lately and this is just what I needed. I can tell you're a great writer and I look forward to future chapters :)