Dammit, that was such a touching ending that my eyes actually watered a bit. That was incredibly sweet. Very excited to see what will happen the next morning. Amazing chapter as always. c:
p.s. THE BLIND DATE WAS TOTALLY HARRY I'M JUST SAYIN'
@ BecauseSheSaidSo Yes, exactly! At least it's a start! Things start rolling after this. I'm quite excited for the next two chapters especially. Thanks again!
Okay before I start reading. Mibba has done me a gross injustice by not emailing about the previous chapter. So now I get to read two tonight instead of the one that I thought I was going to get. I was so happy when I saw that you updated. Now I will read and make one long ass comment about both chapters:)
I don't really know how to start, but I am so glad Blake got together with the boys. Also Niall, God bless. I'm really glad that she knows Niall is right. I mean Louis doesn't deserve it, but at the same time at least it's a start. Can't wait to see how everything goes with hopefully letting Louis back in. Great chapter, and I bet you did great on your finals. :D
After five minutes in, my feet started to hurt and the lights began to feel like pins on my eyes and the noise from the event seemed to seep through every crack of the walls and pinch me with every breath I took. I wanted to go home. Love this for some reason
I was going to Louis’s. OOOF
My eyes wandered to the pot of white carnations nooooOOOOooooOOOOoOOoOOoOOOOOOOOpe
Ooooooooh disappointed OHHHHHHHH NO
“Okay, so if you’re not here to talk, and you’re not here to forgive me, then what the hell do you want, Blake?” [whines incoherently]
“I only promised that if I dropped you off at class that I’d leave you alone, but you had me pull over before we even got there.” you tricky bastard
“I’m worried that she, that she might be using you. [WHINING INTENSIFIES]
“Babe,” he tried again, his voice hitching and crumbling like a rich chocolate cake. [WHINING UNTIL I DIE]
@ Zen Molek Louis never thinks before he speaks and I think I love that about his character here. It's tough to work around but it makes things so entertaining! I'm sorry about all the angst, but I promise it'll get better soon. Thanks again for the comment!
AY YA YAY I wanna grab them both and sit them down with some hot chocolate with mini marshmallows and swaddle them up in blankets and just hug the anger and sadness away
I just want them to be friends again but Louis does put his foot in his mouth a lot and it was not the right time to bring the mum situation up!! AY ya yay these two!!!
@ rebel.at.heart. Harry in this chapter is one of my favorites! And you're right - Louis hasn't really proven himself yet. Proven himself worthy of her forgiveness. He wants it, though, I think that much is obvious, and I think you'll see in the next few chapters how he'll [somewhat unintentionally] pick himself back up and show Blake how much she means to him and how sorry he is and that he's truly remorseful and that he's willing to work to earn back her trust. And I will say that Blake's mom still has an important part to play. You hit the nail on the head! Thanks again for your comment.
@ BecauseSheSaidSo These two are really frustrating, but you're right, they both let off a little steam and said some things that needed saying. Thanks so much, always! You leave such great comments.
I'm p sure that Louis doesn't deserve her forgiveness yet. All he's done is ignore what she wants (by paying for the stove to be fixed, showing up at her door over and over, etc.) and then he invaded her privacy by going through her phone. Big no no, dude. Also, then he basically accused her mom of using her to get to him?? That sounded really narcissistic and also made him a huuuuge hypocrite. But I'm scared that he's right and then she's gonna feel even worse because he was right and she was wrong about her own mother and I don't want the poor babe to feel any worse. She's been through enough. But really Lou needs to think of some way to show he's sorry without getting irritated with her because hello you have no right to be the one who's irritated. (also I love Harry)