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  • natabox

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    Time to update
    September 21st, 2014 at 09:02pm
  • SinnerforVengenz

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    PLEASE UPDATE!!! I love this story!
    October 4th, 2013 at 10:07pm
  • natabox

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    Woop all caught up and up to date, I am absolutely in love with your recent chapter updates, I have never been much of a fan of Bert but you do make him very likeable in this story!
    We are finally seeing small baby step progress in her relationship with Zack but who knows if that will last long :)
    August 8th, 2013 at 11:44am
  • gothique4

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    “Holy shrunken balls Batman! Shit!” muahahahaa

    I just knew the hair comment was Brian before I even read the next sentence lol

    I just love Bert - he's an evil genius :-p

    Awww Zacky with the little kiddie was so cute but then she had to go and lose her mind again that he caught her when she fell off the rickety chair and table. I don't know who was more shocked that she apologized - her or him lol
    August 3rd, 2013 at 02:15am
  • Burnt_Bridges_Fall

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    @ gothique4
    Hahahaha thank you! I thought "baby rock star" was fitting as he is so young and everything!
    And the fact that they have a friendship in real life made it easy to write them in a story together even if the BVB guys are a tiny bit part!
    But I thought "baby rock star" was particularly perfect too hahaha!

    And I'm glad you liked my random text session hahaha!
    it's so weird to write sometimes, but as everyone nowadays is always on their phones it made sense to try and write it in because a story without it doesn't make sense. So I try and at least make the texts entertaining to read hahaha!!!
    July 27th, 2013 at 08:03am
  • Burnt_Bridges_Fall

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    @ crazy.sexy.cool
    Hahaha yes indeed! Course. . . ya have to get through the evil filler first to get to the good stuff hahaha! But isn't that always how it works right?
    The next set of updates are plotted out in note form and eagerly waiting for me to finish my other story update so they can be written!
    The best part about having this big fun ideas/chapters written in note form already is that it takes like no time at all to write them!
    So hang in there! And read evil filler chapters in the mean time hahaha!!!
    July 27th, 2013 at 08:00am
  • gothique4

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    hahahaha just caught up with the last two chapters and they're hilarious. I love how Bert calls Andy "baby rockstar" lol

    I loved the text from Jimmy with everyone thinking that Bert had run away *snicker*.
    July 21st, 2013 at 09:53am
  • crazy.sexy.cool

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    @ Burnt_Bridges_Fall
    Oooooh fun times ahead?? Sounds like a great progression already.
    July 9th, 2013 at 04:45am
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    @ crazy.sexy.cool
    Hahaha yay I am so glad to hear that! I know some people really hate filler chapters but alas they are a necessary evil sometimes!
    The next ones shouldn't too fillerish and there's some real fun times ahead that's to be sure!
    July 9th, 2013 at 04:41am
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    @ Burnt_Bridges_Fall
    I loved them eeeeven if they were fillers!!
    July 9th, 2013 at 03:20am
  • Burnt_Bridges_Fall

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    @ crazy.sexy.cool
    Hun. . . you got it!!!
    I'm actually working on it as we "speak" so don't you worry!
    I'm thinking either Tuesday night or Wednesday night at the latest you'll have a new update!
    I hope you liked the 2 new ones I posted eeeeeeven if they were only filler!!!
    July 9th, 2013 at 12:54am
  • crazy.sexy.cool

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    Please update again soon! :)
    July 9th, 2013 at 12:46am
  • Burnt_Bridges_Fall

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    @ t0.Live.Eternally...
    Hahahaha that is the most amazing thing ever!
    To hear that one of my stories is memorable in that way, to leave it for a long time and then come back and remember all about it where you left off, is absolutely AMAZING to hear!!!
    I go all soft and squishy hearing it hahahaha!!!
    I also love hearing from people who have been reading my story a long time.
    It means a lot to me that you've stuck with me this long and have been ever so patient with my horrible life and how it screws with my writing and updating!
    The simple fact that you keep coming back for more really makes me smile like WHOA!
    I hope you see the two new updates and I hope that you know more is on the way!!!
    Thank you again my dear!!!
    July 8th, 2013 at 07:08am
  • Burnt_Bridges_Fall

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    @ R0B0T!C
    Thank you my dear!
    You have no idea how amazing it is to hear/see those words.
    I just don't think I was really and truly prepared for what that nasty comment was going to do to me. Kinda knocked the wind right out of my sails and made me take a step back from writing. Which was a foolish thing to do but oh well, it's in the past. Over and done with I say!
    And it's because of amazing people like you, with your ever so lovely comments and words of encouragement, that I was able to move on and continue with my writing.
    So thank you ever so much for having my "writing" back! I really and honestly do appreciate it more than you know!

    I hope to keep your will as my story goes on!
    And even though the 2 updates I just posted are evil filler I hope you enjoy them regardless!!!
    July 8th, 2013 at 07:05am
  • Burnt_Bridges_Fall

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    @ natabox
    Oh Natalie, dearest dearest Natalie. . .
    I do so love you my dear!!! I have taken a lot of heart in what you said and really went over everything.
    And of course you are right, that the one bad comment does not out way all the other glorious comments from people over the years.
    And so I am passed that wicked evil person and onto bigger and better things. . . LIKE UPDATING now that I have internet back again!!!

    And rur rur naughty Zacky indeed! He seems to have a pension for 2 steps forward and 18 steps back haha!!
    And yeah, I'm a sucker for writing Jimmy moments. XD

    Hope you see the new updates my dear! Even if they are just evil filler!!!
    July 8th, 2013 at 07:01am
  • t0.Live.Eternally...

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    I've been following this story for over a year. I would always sign in randomly, hoping for an update, cause its one of the best stories I've read since I started reading avenged fanfics. I know great writing takes some time, and I'm so happy to see likeeee 20 updates since the last time I was on. And tho its been a long time since I last read this one, I remember exactly how it left off. Thats how well this story stands out for me. Great work! Can't wait to catch up! =] Mr. Green Mr. Green
    February 25th, 2013 at 07:04am
  • R0B0T!C

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    please keep updating its one of my favorites and don't let other people bring you down because they are only jealous your more talented than they are and can't appreciate your great writing skills. :)
    February 16th, 2013 at 06:19am
  • natabox

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    Woooop loved the updates as per usual :) don't take the bad comment to heart look at how many positive updates you have had

    Tut tut naughty Zack 2 steps forward 3 steps back with him loved the chicken game it was a nice Jimmy moment
    February 9th, 2013 at 09:25pm
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    @ Burnt_Bridges_Fall
    awesome thank you!!! I just looked
    January 17th, 2013 at 05:28pm
  • Burnt_Bridges_Fall

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    @ chibihyuga
    Hahaha sneaky indeed!!! You gotta add a little sneaky in there every once and a while! And keep your eyes peeled then for the next chapter sets as they'll contain the pre-mentioned chicken fight!

    Mwuahahahaha!!! Ahem, sorry. Mr. Green
    January 5th, 2013 at 02:43am