Animosity in the Ranks - Comments

gothique -
Hahahaha I am so glad that you're liking it! And I do say that you MUST try out the flaming marshmallow game! It is just as fun as it sounds!!

This has got to me one of my favourite stories on here - and the flaming marshmallows game was awesome. I so must try that :p

natabox -
oh natabox, natabox, natabox. . . Why do you have to be so intuitive? Hahaha! :D And hey, it wasn't too sneaky! I always update 2 chapters in a night, one right after the other! So that can't be sneaky!!! It's habit!! :D And you know me, I am a lover of false security and a really good explosion. ;)

crazy.sexy.cool -
I am glad that you are glad my dear! And I am beyond tickled pink that you think that of my story!
That is a truly amazing compliment I shall have to put down in my book!! Thank you!!

hotfish -
Yay for goofy sides! I do so love writing them. It gives me a chance to let loose and by goofy myself even if just for an unexpected moment!

Koschka -
Why hello new reader!! Before I get too long winded just felt like saying welcome aboard! And I'm glad you're here!! I know that the "you-writing thing" is sometimes hard to handle at first. I played around with different perspectives but the Second Person perspective really worked for me on this story. Every story I write is different and I try to capture all the perspectives at some point in my writing. BUT that being said and done I am truly glad that you got the hang of it and that it didn't turn you away!! And I can't believe you have taken on the feat of reading my story in an entire sitting! I applaud those that do it and heartfully give you mine! I can't believe you did it! Or are doing it as the case may be!! I am so glad that you are liking my story THAT much, because I know how it's a lot of work! And I thank you for that compliment! I try my best to write a really good story or two and to hear people say they think it is one of the best. . . Well that pretty much makes my day! And wanted to say, that regardless of what hour it was and the fact that English isn't your first language, you made perfect sense to me! I hope you continue to enjoy my story as it unfolds! Welcome aboard!!

Wow a sneaky 2 part update =) not that I am complaining, though I do feel you are lulling us into a false sense of security and that its all going to go down hill ....

Hey :)
So, i had to be in bed the whole day as I'm sick and I started reading your story. First I was a bit irritated with the whole you-writing thing (Sorry, that I can't describe it better, but english is not my first language and it's pretty late in my country, so my brain isn't working that much anymore) but I'm really, really impressed with your writing style!
I started reading your story today and am now at chapter 73... so I think this shows you, how much I like your story. Yeah, just wanted to tell you and this is one of the best stories I've read here :)
Looking forward for reading the other chapters :)

Lol. I love this chapter. It really shows their goofy side :)

I'm just super happy that you're updating again!! This is one of my favorites on the site :D

Eeep I hadn't finished nata. . .
I also wanted to say I was glad that you liked her softer side. It was something I had been kinda wanting to get at for a while now. But trying to figure out how to do it it really.

And yes, I thought the coffee machine would be a good light hearted situation/chapters. I wanted something silly following her awakening to what happens if she drinks too much. Thought it would be a nice break before this next set of chapters.

I have 4 chapters to upload for my Jersey's Voice story but then I'll be doing the next 2 for here. So keep your eyes peeled!!

natabox!!!!!!!
Hello my dearest natabox!!
I am so glad that you liked the two new chapters. :D

Ahhhh that was great !!!

It was nice to see a sensitive side to Kales and gave a bit more insight about her.

The coffee machine incident was awesome haha, quite light hearted chapters, as is the norm can't wait to read more =D

Cygfa - Baahahaha thank you for your enthusiasm!! It is definitely a yay moment.
Well at least for me!! :D
I am glad that you liked the side of Kales that gave out the VIP status for a day.
I wanted to show another side of her that isn't always so tough and gruff.
And I hear yah on the sales girl being right, I think that's the plan Stan!

They were VERY lucky that no one got hurt actually!! And that the coffee didn't burn them!
I didn't want anything serious, just something startling that could be made into something fun.
And wha-la! Espresso machine explosion!

Yaaay! Updates!!!

I loved Kales Mae when she gave the girls VIP stauts! <3 <3
And the sales girl might be right: Jeph's not good enough for her.

And the bit with the coffee machine....I guess they were lucky no one got hurt. But it was still funny. :-)

Ahhh how I do love you miss Katie and how your brain works.
Best thing ever!!

bwaaaaaahahahahahahahaha! i'll take a brian and johnny covered in coffee any day! no better substance to be covered in in my opinion ;)

nata -
Glad you loved the mass update extravaganza!! I have been computer-less once again for. . . well a while as you can see by my post date. But I have been writing and note taking the old fashioned way, and burned through a lot of lined paper and junk mail scraps doing so. Now that I am back once again in the digital age I have a lot to transcribe so I can upload and get to you and everyone else. Hang in there my dear!!!

crazy -
Superlative? Really? WINNING!! I'm all over your "now" request. Just as fast as my little fingers can type my hand written stuff you will have your updates. Promise like the sun rises each am!!

Cygfa -
What would I do without you my dear? I really have no clue. At all. Thank you for the bump! And your continual excitement even though I have to be the worst writer on the planet with how my updating goes. As I have been saying, keep an eye out because as soon as I get my hand written typed up there will be updates to be had!!

emily -
Nooooo!! No crying!! Don't cry! *hands tissues* Tears make you puffy. And make makeup run! And make me cry too!! Nooo!! Promise of updates soon to come help stop the tears? Yesh? Oh please say yes!!!

Please hurry and update I'll cry if you don't

Update...like now xD
Love this story!

*bump*
Hoping for an update soon. Can't wait to see what'll happen next!

Wow I love this story! And how long it is lol
Can't wait for an update!