Animosity in the Ranks - Comments

  • Burnt_Bridges_Fall

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    love vs. hate:
    Meh, no comments, first comments, any comments, I'm just happy you're reading the story and that you're liking it!!
    And yes the rivalry is very intriguing indeed, and so much fun!
    Thanks for the love hun and I will mos def be continuing, in like a few minutes actually. Glad you're along for the ride!
    May 12th, 2008 at 04:58pm
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    vampie:
    well if they hurried up and made up then there wouldn't be a story right? Haahahaha!! And yes, the ever so mysterious reason why they hate one another..... must keep you in suspense for a while longer. So sorry :D

    And yes, I fully agree... I too wish Jimmy were there for me too. I think everyone should have their "own" ;)
    May 12th, 2008 at 04:56pm
  • Burnt_Bridges_Fall

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    Wow, damn girl! You just sat and read the whole thing? You so rule!
    And yes, preparing will be a good idea because tour is going to be an outrageous explosion. And I'm glad you like their fights, it's so much fun to write!
    And i will be updating pronto no worries!!
    May 12th, 2008 at 04:54pm
  • x-love-vs-hate-x

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    So, I know I haven't been commenting on this for a while ... If ever.
    That is not totally my fault - my computer hates me and barely lets me do anything.
    This is my fourth attempt of commenting.
    Anyways
    I absolutly love the story - so much.
    But I want to know what caused the rivlery between them!
    haha anyways, keep up the good work, it is amazing.
    x
    May 12th, 2008 at 12:38pm
  • Elizabeth Lavenza

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    ohhh. Why can't they just make up? They're hating and they don't even remember. Its a fucking mystery! lol. *waits in suspense*
    Yay Jimmy! I wish he was there for me. lol. XD

    loved the update/s! XD

    xoxo
    vampie
    May 12th, 2008 at 09:27am
  • love_is_the_movement

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    Ooh i just found this story like yesterday and i havent been able to keep away!
    So yeah basically i just finished and now i soooooo cannot wait till they go on tour!!
    Like Faraway7 said, im bracing myself now cuz it seems like some major drama is comin up.
    Ahh, i just love when zacky and kales have their fights =]
    hehe.
    Anyways...update soon?
    May 12th, 2008 at 07:03am
  • Burnt_Bridges_Fall

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    Faraway:
    BAAHAHAHHAHA!!! Have I told you lately how much I adore your comments? Because I do. Flat out. Not gonna lie.

    And yeah brace yourself for when tour starts. Assuming crash positions now would be advisory. And....... Jimmy knows ALL!!! Mhua hahahahha hahahaha!!!

    Ahem...... sorry......

    More will be up as soon as I hit submit here!! Well not exactly, I will be going to put it up and make it all pretty and then it will be up. But ya know what I mean! Off to appease the little reader monkeys!
    May 12th, 2008 at 12:29am
  • Burnt_Bridges_Fall

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    Thank you ever so much love. I am so glad that the amusement park chapters were such a hit with people. And as long as I am making you think further into the story then I am a happy camper. Keep guesstimating!!!
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    vampie: [again]
    so glad you like the character Kales, even though I wrote many stories before this one she's still my fav character. I so wanna grow up to be her. Haahaha. Sad but true.
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    LipglossLies:
    I third that motion. Yay Jared Leto! I mean come on......
    May 12th, 2008 at 12:26am
  • Burnt_Bridges_Fall

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    xxkimmi:

    Thank you ever so much doll. It's always good to know that what I'm writing isn't boring people. I'll be getting some more up soon. Promise.
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    vampie:
    Baahahahhahaha!!!
    Glad you felt the same about Zacky in that as I do. And I'm glad you liked the amusement park chapters, they were so much fun to write. Some of my favorites to date. And thanks for the "writer's" comment, yeah not gonna lie, my ego kinda got a little bit bigger.
    May 12th, 2008 at 12:22am
  • Faraway7

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    WOW.....
    That's really all I can say to that comment love.
    Like whoa....
    Uh..... thank you just doesn't seem enough for that comment. Like really.
    I really appreciate the detail you put into the story. And yeah, their hostility is my favorite thing to write in all my stories. I found it to be refreshing in a fan fic to have that sort of animosity with the hidden under tones. Or not so hidden as the case may be with the whole lap incident *wink wink*

    Glad you're subscribing and more will be out soon! Be prepared for a LONG story. And hopefully I will not bored you.
    Ha! No fucking way this story can bore me...I just know all hell will break loose when tour starts up. I'm bracing myself now.

    I just keep thinking "Jimmy KNOWS what neither Zacky nor Kales wanna admit to themselves". I'm just waiting for one of them to break. I hope Jeph doesn't get hurt too badly. I mean, anyone should suspect from the amount of "hate" between Zack & Kales that something more is going on.

    Woo, I am so excited for more! :D
    May 11th, 2008 at 02:45pm
  • Faraway7

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    Man I love it! Seems like Kales sorta has feelings for Zacky and wishes he was his old self more. Man, I'd love to do Jared Leto's hair!
    May 11th, 2008 at 02:38pm
  • sweet dreams.

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    i agree.
    yay jared leto!
    x
    May 11th, 2008 at 11:46am
  • Elizabeth Lavenza

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    Oh, How does she do it? lmfao. I wish i was as awesome as her. lol. XD
    loved the update! XD

    xoxo
    vampie
    May 11th, 2008 at 09:40am
  • Clairvoyant Disease.

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    Rawr. Zacky just had to go and ruin all the fun!!! *huffles*
    I loved the amusement park ^_^ Very amusing. :D I still think that Kailey and Zacky secretly like each other :O But that's just my guestimate ^_^
    More soooon!!!! ^_^
    May 7th, 2008 at 06:27am
  • Elizabeth Lavenza

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    ZACKY YOU DOUCHE BAG! You just had to ruin the fun! D:<
    I loved the amusement chapters! lol. You's an awesome wirter. XD Just so you know. =D

    xoxo
    vampie
    May 6th, 2008 at 10:20am
  • xxkimmi

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    loved the story, itz really good Smile

    can't wait for more
    May 6th, 2008 at 07:49am
  • Burnt_Bridges_Fall

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    Faraway7:
    WOW.....
    That's really all I can say to that comment love.
    Like whoa....
    Uh..... thank you just doesn't seem enough for that comment. Like really.
    I really appreciate the detail you put into the story. And yeah, their hostility is my favorite thing to write in all my stories. I found it to be refreshing in a fan fic to have that sort of animosity with the hidden under tones. Or not so hidden as the case may be with the whole lap incident *wink wink*

    Glad you're subscribing and more will be out soon! Be prepared for a LONG story. And hopefully I will not bored you.
    May 6th, 2008 at 02:41am
  • Faraway7

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    What a fucking amazing story! Found this a few days ago when I registered. I love the hostility between Kales and Zacky, but it's so obvious underneath all their hate, they totally want each other.

    During all those physically confrontational moments, I anticipate Zacky and Kales jumping each others' bones.

    Also, I have a sneaking suspicion Zacky was getting annoyed at Kales moving around in his lap because he was getting turned on.

    Cannot wait for more! Subscribing now!
    May 5th, 2008 at 09:03pm
  • Burnt_Bridges_Fall

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    Baahahahahha!!!
    Thanks love! Ever so much.
    Glad you're taking a liking to it!
    May 5th, 2008 at 08:15pm
  • sweet dreams.

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    i love you!!!!
    lol
    she doesnt wish it was here, but he sure as hell does. XD
    xx
    May 5th, 2008 at 07:17pm