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  • antithesis

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    @ kurby13
    Awww, well I will get on writing that. It's called 'Fireworks' be on the look out for it<3
    September 12th, 2013 at 04:56pm
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    @ opposites distract
    I'd feel much better xc I cried my little eyes out
    September 12th, 2013 at 04:53pm
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    @ kurby13
    I'm sorry :c. If it makes you feel better I'll write you an Austlan fluff one shot.
    September 12th, 2013 at 04:46pm
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    @ opposites distract
    Still doesn't say Austin dies xc
    September 12th, 2013 at 04:31pm
  • antithesis

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    @ kurby13
    It's rated nc-17
    September 12th, 2013 at 01:43pm
  • timberwolf121

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    Should probably warn in the description of character death...
    September 12th, 2013 at 01:36pm
  • morganYDGN

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    That ending literally made me want to punch you in ye face. Lol wahhhhhhh :(
    September 6th, 2013 at 03:43am
  • CallMeKael

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    awh this was sad but good.
    September 5th, 2013 at 06:04pm
  • Invisible Children

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    Why, why, why?!?!
    September 5th, 2013 at 11:32am
  • Jalex_BaraSassKarth

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    @ opposites distract
    It's okay (I rant to all the time) and now I'm to tired to think straight, so good night :)
    September 5th, 2013 at 07:41am
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    @ JagkBaraB0n3r
    I wasn't trying to insinuate that you didn't appreciate or didn't like the story, you just really caught me at a bad time, I was in a terrible mood when you commented, and I ranted a little (a lot). It wasn't directed at you completely, and I'm sorry if I came off that way. Don't be sorry, I'm glad you liked this, and it's your opinion, I'm not mad about it or anything. Sorry for ranting, and thank you for reading it!
    September 5th, 2013 at 06:25am
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    @ opposites distract
    It's not that I don't appreciate it, cause I do and I'd never be able to write something this amazing and realistic. But cause this could happen in real life is why I thought it wasn't all that surprising.. and I'm sorry if I offended you in any way, and I think your awesome for putting so much emotion into your writing and using this to help you. Cause we get a kick ass story out of it and helping yourself at the same time. In a way, I envy you. Cause if I were in your place, i'd probably relapse and never leave my room again.. So, yeah, sorry.
    September 5th, 2013 at 06:00am
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    @ JagkBaraB0n3r
    Honestly, I wrote the ending for me. The other ending would have just been posted because I didn't want people to be upset with me, it would have been what people wanted. Sometimes shitty things happen and you don't get what you want, and sometimes it's not a surprise it happens. I needed this to be sad and tragic and I needed Austin to die, and for Alan to overcome it. I needed this story to be real; real for me. In a way, I wrote this to show myself that I can get over what I'm going through, just like Alan did. I said I might post the alternate ending- which is happier, but not all that surprising, unless you consider basically coming back from the point of no return surprising (I just consider it kind of unrealistic)- for those who'd want to read it in the future, but not right now. I write for me, not for my readers. I love that some of you like what I wrote, I appreciate it, it gives me confidence, and it makes me feel proud. Thank you to those of you who enjoyed it and commented, I enjoyed the release I got while writing it.
    September 5th, 2013 at 05:22am
  • Jalex_BaraSassKarth

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    @ opposites distract
    Idk? It just kinda seemed obvious... Well to me it did...
    September 5th, 2013 at 05:10am
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    @ JagkBaraB0n3r
    Why do you say that?
    September 5th, 2013 at 04:53am
  • fiction246

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    That was really really sad :(
    September 5th, 2013 at 02:35am
  • aashbyinmypants

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    I am a hysterical sobbing mess rn
    September 5th, 2013 at 01:40am
  • Jalex_BaraSassKarth

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    Some how, it's not that surprising that you killed him off...
    September 5th, 2013 at 01:34am
  • IamSantanah

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    I can't stop the tears. Help me. That was so sad but good.
    September 5th, 2013 at 12:59am
  • IamSantanah

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    I can't stop the tears. Help me. That was so sad but good.
    September 5th, 2013 at 12:59am