Just Breathe - Comments, page 4

andherewegoagain (100)

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ugh they met so cute SIGHS

May 9th, 2013 at 10:34pm

CallMeKael (100)

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Awww I want more c:

May 9th, 2013 at 09:08pm

fiction246 (100)

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'You can show me how you yell really loud' haha OMG I love it so much!!! This is really great so far!!! Poor Austin :(

May 9th, 2013 at 10:55am

yurio (100)

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I'm really loving this story. Oh my goodness, the kitten is so freaking adorable. I was so sad when Alan ignored Austin. I'm glad he went to sit with him though. (:

May 9th, 2013 at 07:00am

m0riarty (100)

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this is really good, the only tip i have for you is putting each thing of dialouge into its own paragraph like in actual books because it's way easier to see who's talking that way.

May 9th, 2013 at 06:26am

fiction246 (100)

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Okay so this is really cute!!!! Can't wait for more :) I'm not a cat person but this little kitten seems so cute!!!!

May 5th, 2013 at 09:35am

andherewegoagain (100)

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aw this is adorable yes

May 3rd, 2013 at 05:00am

CallMeKael (100)

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Aw I love this so much already c':

May 2nd, 2013 at 04:05pm