Chasing Stanley - Comments

I have gotten quite used to who's point of view each segment is in - and it doesn't take me long to figure out who it is. At first in Chkaddd, especially with all the nicknames, I got a little confused, but not any more. And I DID like the segment from Hairy's point of view - it was kind of like the "kibbles and bits" commercials (not sure if you know what I mean by that!)

Telling the story from different points of view does allow the reader to see things from many perspectives - to really get into the characters' heads. I especially am enjoying how you are writing Taylor - very realistic!

But the last little bit of this chapter was hard to read - I can still see the teeth flying out of Sid's mouth!!

@ Thatmom
Thanks for the support. I am hoping you might be willing to answer a couple of questions for me? Does Hairy the dog's perspective work? Can you tell which character is speaking in the short segments? I am interested in an objective opinion.~ BG

Love Sid and Tylyn. Such a hot couple.