The Ripple Effect - Comments

Oh dear, bye bye good mood!! Looking forward to more of this :) I want to see a happy ending for elaina and Lucas (hopefully!!)

I've been waiting for that to happen :) looking forward to more!!!

I love Zeya, Eliana and Luca as a little family!!! Looking forward to more :)

Interesting. He is confused about her!!!

I so think that Zeya is her daughter. I don't know if I have said it before. Looking forward to more :)

Is zeya her daughter?!! That would be so awesome. Maybe her and Luca would fall in love and be a family of misfits that turned to fit together

Wow Elaina's story was so sad :( I was hoping Zeya was her daughter. Looking forward to more :) thanks for updating 3 times!!!

Can't wait to see what happens with Elaina!!!

They butt heads but I see potential for them :) looking forward to more!!!

So they are going back to Orion's pack. I wonder how that is going to go!!!

Damn woman couldn't take no for an answer!!! Looking forward to seeing where they go from here :)

Looking forward to more :) his relationship with Zeya is really sweet!!! And I love how oblivious he was :P

Aww he called her his daughter!!! So sweet!!! Looking forward to more :)

Creepy!!! She grinned when she killed the bug!!!! Oh my gosh!!! Haha looking forward to more :)

I agree with your authors note. They are making each other change for the best. Luca never talks about Sophie anymore though...is thst good or bad??

I love that they are helping each other. I agree with your authors note!! Poor Zeya though :( looking forward to more :)

I love it, I love the idea that Luca is a fatherly figure now

I can't believe he was going to leave her!!! I'm glad that he isn't now!!! Looking forward to more :) I'm loving Lucas's story!!!

I just found this!!! Love it. Part one and the beginning of part two!!! But I wasn't expecting Sophie to not even humor Luca... That hurt my feelings lol. Iah's bitterness makes me feel a bit better and am so excited about part two. I also love the name Zeya and I can't wait for the next update!!!

I love the name Zeya! It really matches her personality! Also I can't wait to read more!