I love the idea of the story so far, even if there's only really one chapter, and the layout as well for the most part. If I had a suggestion, it would be to get rid of the content picture. It looks like old paper. It's hard to read on because it isn't seamless... other than that, I think you're doing a great job! I also hope that you have a point of view for more than Margo, just to add some difference...idk. Just an idea 
May 19th, 2013 at 12:40am