I loved this chapter; the internal battle of hers' that you display is really good! Im so glad Eric kissed her, hopefully thatll make her feel SOMETHING. Looking forward to reading more. ^.^
Good update. There are a lot of run on sentences though. Each paragraph is one sentence, when it should really be 2 or 3. It makes the chapter really hard to read. Other than that, this was good
This was a good update! I kind of wish Eric wasn't joining the football team because of Hayley's situation. But I wish that. Hayley would tell him the whole story because that way he understands why she is the way she is.
@ LoveDrug94 Oh my gosh honey, I understand. This story is written based on my own experience, if you ever need to talk please don't hesitate to message me! You have no idea how wonderful it is to hear you say that. Thank you sweetheart. xxo
This is an amazing story. It makes me cry and sob uncontrollablely because I know what it's like to be in that position. Where no one believes you after its happen. It tears you apart from the inside. Thank you for telling my story. Thank you.
I've been reading this story for the past hour and I've loved every minute of it. I feel so bad for the main character, especially since no one -not even her parents- believe her. I'm glad she has article though, otherwise I feel like she would be dead already. Eric is a sweetheart and I love him!
Seth is a jerk and an idiot and I hate him. How could you do that to someone and then frame them as a bad guy? He pretty much made Hayley's life a living nightmare. He raped her and then got his friends to do it? Or was it just him?
The layout is very fitting for this story and the summary really drew me to this. The first chapter was well written (every chapter is) and really set the whole story up.
This story could easily get published and I would probably buy it, Please keep writing!
@ leslieclaypool Thanks, I am figuring some stuff out with it but I plan to update soon, think I have things pretty much sorted, so a new update should come out soon! :)