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  • DarkMystique

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    This is for the 'story-swap-comment' I got! :)

    Dance stories aren't usually my cup of tea, so I'll do my best to giving you a constructive criticism. :) It was written well with no mistakes in the grammar and spelling department. An original story with promising future.

    I do like Damon and Desera's relationship; how understand and patient they were with each other. Very luvvy-duvvy - *giggles." Overall, I did like it.
    July 28th, 2015 at 06:10pm
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    This is for the 'story-swap-comment' I got! :)

    Dance stories aren't usually my cup of tea, so I'll do my best to giving you a constructive criticism. :) It was written well with no mistakes in the grammer and spelling department. An original story with promising future.

    I do like Damon and Desera's relationship; how understand and patient they were with each other. Very luvvy-duvvy - *giggles." Overall, I did like it.
    July 28th, 2015 at 06:10pm
  • Reya92

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    I LIIIIIKE LIIIKKEEE LIIIIKEEE your storry so much, cant wait for the sequel to be completed Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
    February 21st, 2014 at 10:38pm
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    February 21st, 2014 at 10:38pm
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    February 21st, 2014 at 10:37pm
  • CountryGirl712

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    Hi, this might seem like a really odd and mildly disappointing comment. But, this story looks really, really good like the layout and all. The comments people wrote are really enthusiastic and you have 8 recommendations! Wow! But I can't read stories about dance, it's nothing personal I swear it's just kind of a long story that I don't really like sharing. Sorry for wasting your time! I just got this story through comment swap, you are probably irritated, I know I would be but I'm sorry :( I recognize your name though! I think that I've read some of your other stories and I think you commented on mine, call of the waves?
    January 13th, 2014 at 08:35pm
  • skittles36

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    Oh! I almost forgot! I love the way you write too! It's so amazing. It draws me in. It's hard to find a story like that these days. You know what I mean? Haha. Like I said before, I can't wait for the next chapter!! :DDDD <3
    December 29th, 2013 at 03:08pm
  • skittles36

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    This is really good. This story stuck out to me like a sore thumb and now I'm addicted. I can't wait until the next chapter. Please update again soon!! <3 I'm totally subscribing to this ;D
    December 29th, 2013 at 03:06pm
  • Ccasimir

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    Wow! Really cant wait for the next update! :D
    July 5th, 2013 at 05:41pm
  • Pigface84

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    Something......fun?
    June 5th, 2013 at 03:34pm
  • Ccasimir

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    Amazingggg :D update plzzzzz :)
    June 5th, 2013 at 06:29am
  • Pigface84

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    His sounds realllllllllyyyyyyy good! Just please update ASAP! <3
    June 5th, 2013 at 12:16am
  • humanik

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    Me either. hate this slow pokishness
    May 21st, 2013 at 01:46am
  • Allicat

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    Can wait for the first chapter!! Absolutely loved its only a dance step!! Update soon
    May 20th, 2013 at 01:45am
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