October 8th, 2013 at 12:35pm
Entice - Comments
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I shouldn't be this obsessed with this story, but I am! I got too excited when I saw you had updated. Another great chapter!October 8th, 2013 at 09:49am
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This is so fantastic! It's more than just smut, it has actual plot structure and everything (which makes for an amazing story!) I love the way you write, it's so conversational and comfortable to read. I'm excited to see what else happens! :)October 8th, 2013 at 08:24am
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i actually genuinely got the email notification about this story while in bed on my phone, and actually got out of bed, turned my computer back on and read it from my computer so i could leave you a good comment on this.
First off. THANK THE LORD YOU UPDATED! I'm a senior in college and I completely understand how busy schoolwork gets with a job (i work about 30 hours a week as a server). Life gets crazy hectic sometimes!
But secondly! i'm so glad you updated, and i'm praying i dont have to wait as long for the next update as i did for this one because i am on the edge of my seat in anticipation. I wanted to know more about what would happen at the BBQ and just like that, chapter over. I was like WHAT NO NOT YET. This story is so compelling and riveting, it literally gets me suckered in at every word.
Thirdly, i totally agree that if you don't add more that would push them, they won't grow. They've already grown so much and its truly amazing, because it seems like it takes them forever to get to this point, but yet it happened pretty quick. I think they for both of them, Faye as she enters into this new world, and Alex, as he finds a new partner, both need to explore a bit so they both know what they like now that they are together. I can't wait to see what you come up with,
Fourth. I took my worst classes midterm tonight, so your timing is impeccable.
Please don't make me wait forever if you can help it!October 8th, 2013 at 07:58am -
J'ai besoin de plus!!!!October 8th, 2013 at 07:50am
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Hi hello yes I love you as always. Goodness gracious this story always has me GLUED.September 1st, 2013 at 06:19pm
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Im so in love with this its a bit ridiculous. And hour writing has improved by miles. Its just so elegant, concise and captivating. I hope the next chapter isnt too far behindSeptember 1st, 2013 at 02:14pm
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This story is just sensational! your are an amazing writer! can’t wait for more of any story, i just love to read your stuff <3September 1st, 2013 at 02:06am
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I can't even explain how much I loved this story! I though ti was absolutely freaking adorable how enticed Alex was by faye at the beginning. He could hardly even focus his attention away from her to focus on the music, and I think it's hilarious how she's doing it just to tease him. I really can't blame her though because I think I'd be just as guilty!
This story is amazing, and your writing is absolutely flawless. I love how you describe every scene and everything just flows together so well. I really enjoyed reading this and I can't wait to see what happens next!August 15th, 2013 at 04:17am -
Is it bad that I keep rereading this story over and over?August 12th, 2013 at 09:27pm
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omg, i love all your stories so much! you're a really good writer. keep it up! :) xoAugust 11th, 2013 at 02:25am
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I'm excited to see where the relationship goes after this..they're both clealy jealous over one another lol update soon!August 7th, 2013 at 02:13am
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Oh yes I agree with pallid. I'm a huge fan of the French.August 6th, 2013 at 10:21am
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I'd be the biggest liar on earth if I didn't say I loved this dearly.
I cannot wait to see where you take their relationship. I'm excited for the future updates to this.
Also, your writing during this has made a noticeable improvement. It's astounding.August 6th, 2013 at 07:51am -
this chapter is literally perfect. ridiculously perfect.August 5th, 2013 at 06:03pm
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That was amazing! Holy Fuck. <3August 5th, 2013 at 09:37am
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Jesus fucking Christ. I can hardly control myself.August 4th, 2013 at 11:18pm
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the new update killed me. in every sense of the word.
jesus christ, it was so good. infact, it surpassed good.
it was perfect.
asdfghjkl, i loved it.August 4th, 2013 at 10:45pm -
i absolutely love this! I cannot wait until you update again. It kills me that these chapters are so teasing!August 4th, 2013 at 03:23pm
I love where tis heading, i think that you should keep expanding the characters like you are, definitely. i loved the whole BBQ vibrator thing, would love to hear more about that ;)
i totally understand that it could be hard for you to update, most weeks I work 45-50 at work, but then to come home try to write and still have a life, it can be really stressful. But seriously just update whenever you can, i love all all you writing and i think you’re just amazing <3
Keep up the good work gorgeous and i can’t wait for another update! :) <3 xx