July 8th, 2013 at 06:53am
Virgin Blood - Comments
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tell her?? i mean tell him.. of courseJuly 7th, 2013 at 03:42pm
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olivia.. *shakes head* she's got a husband who's a detective and yet she didn't tell her about the stone with the note?? why not? and who threw it through the window?? the mystery is killing me
ah damn.. yeah that is a lot of suspects.. the case sure is a hard nut to crackJuly 7th, 2013 at 03:42pm -
Why didn't she say something about the note!!!! I need more!!!July 7th, 2013 at 11:35am
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Whoa! Breakthrough!
I loved it!
Please update very soon?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
:DJuly 7th, 2013 at 05:09am -
Lol "If he and Olivia wouldn't had lasted at week" xD love that line roftl but this story is awesome! Thank you for the update. Miss this story so much!!!July 7th, 2013 at 05:09am
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Favorite line: Last he had heard, their evidence and links to the case was as weak as Brian’s stomach AWESOME!July 7th, 2013 at 12:47am
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Can I just start off by saying this is amaze-balls. Seriously Every paragraph I was stopping and asking God why my writing can't be as flawless as all of ya'll's.
I love Matt and Olivia. They are so friggin cute. He holds her belly and talks to baby Sanders. I hate that he is always ditching her for work though. I feel like that is really going to bite him in the ass in the end. I'm also freaking out for her safety, because if this psycho is sending them messages than he is targeting them. I read enough mystery novels to know this is heading down a very dangerous road.
I LOVE IT!June 27th, 2013 at 04:51pm -
Holy shit, this is amazing! Really looking forward to more!June 27th, 2013 at 11:01am
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I love Jimmy! Lol he's so awesome.
I loved the update.
Please update again soon?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
:DJune 27th, 2013 at 04:57am -
heheheh jimmy is so frickin' hyper!! love him!!
aaweh! i thought that poor little bri wouldn't get a date and felt so sorry for him, and then she turned around and changed her mind YAY!!June 26th, 2013 at 12:49pm -
Awe, Brian is cute. Lol. Can't wait for more!June 26th, 2013 at 09:27am
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Great chapter :) yay Brian got a date!!! Looking forward to more!!!June 26th, 2013 at 09:22am
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penny and sheldon!! hahah that was so cute!! and poor brian still being sick- i hope he just ate something bad and not got poisoned or something like that..
love the details of whey they're in the lab- totally feels like CSI-NY or something like thatJune 20th, 2013 at 10:53am -
All right! Go Alexis! :-)
Update soon, please!!!!!!June 20th, 2013 at 07:10am -
Whoa! They figured it out how they are connected. That was pretty smart of Alexis. :)
I loved the update.
Please update this again very soon?!?!?!?!?!?!
:DJune 20th, 2013 at 04:30am -
Aww sick Brian is cute!!! Very interesting developments!! Looking forward to more :)June 19th, 2013 at 11:43pm
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Oh how nice :P but in all honesty this is a fantastic story. You weren't kidding when you said you were into CSI. I love how you involve the science with it, someone most be doingtheir research. Really great, keep it upJune 17th, 2013 at 09:29pm
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Oooooooh. A fetish for virginal blood? Interesting. Interesting, indeed.
At least they have a link between the two, they can like check around to see if there's any similar crimes or something and see if they can kind any more.
Awwwwwwh, poor Brian. :c I love how emasculated he is in this story- it works brilliantly!June 17th, 2013 at 08:43am -
Wow. (I swear I say that after every chapter!) This story is just so fucking good! Glad we now have a connection between at least two of the victims...that's a step in the right direction! Can't wait for more.June 17th, 2013 at 08:38am
I know Olivia doesn't want to add to Matt's list of worries, but he really needs to know about the note. :-/