Here from comment swap. I don't like stories about bands or members form them worse i don't like 1D. However i put that all aside as i read this. I connected with the main character from the Prologue. I was a slow learning not learning how to read or write until i was well over the age of 10. I think if you'd had Niall was just a normal character you created. I would have loved the story but i didn't hate it. I think your writing style is really easy to read. And I like the description.
I don't like stories about bands or members form them worse i don't like 1D. However i put that all aside as i read this. I connected with the main character from the Prologue. I was a slow learning not learning how to read or write until i was well over the age of 10. I think if you'd had Niall was just a normal character you created. I would have loved the story but i didn't hate it. I think your writing style is really easy to read. And I like the description.