Just a friendly word of advice: I would look into finding an editor. I have seen so many mistakes in the summary alone. I'm not trying to be harsh, I just want you to know so you can better yourself for future writing.
Perhaps also build on your plot, give a bit more information. I'm not getting a lot at the moment, and I understand you haven't written that much yet, but it's all over the place as far as I can see.
Other than that, you have a unique story that could have potential.
Perhaps also build on your plot, give a bit more information. I'm not getting a lot at the moment, and I understand you haven't written that much yet, but it's all over the place as far as I can see.
Other than that, you have a unique story that could have potential.