Wanderlust - Comments

It's three in the morning and I'm crying. ;-; Why did you have to kill my baby Constantine?

Twists in my heart on last chapter- good sign! Sorry about your WiFi.. I hope it gets up and running better soon!

Well i actually unsubscribed i just kind of figured you gave up on the story. But im happy you are back to it I hope you are here to stay :) You have regained another subscriber haha

errgg. Frustrate me will ya? I am actually glad for the 4 month skip because I wouldn't have wanted to read all of it if nothing was going to happen that you couldn't sum up. I am really looking forward to the update!! Yay!

Hey there! I am VERY glad to see an update, since this was the story that got me interested in Mibba. You definitely haven't lost your roll! I can't wait for the next update! <3

love this story cant wait for more :3

Ahhhh thank you for updating!

The same chapter keeps getting posted twice.

An update for the win! I'm really glad you haven't given up on this story, that life's just got you busy. Good for you for keeping your focus on work and school. Update whenever you can, I am reading this story until the end, no matter how long the time between updates. This story is just too good not finish! I'm interested to see what happens with everyone leaving, especially how D is going to cope with half of her new family leaving, and her lovely Jaden. I can't wait to see where you go with this story, because there's going to be a sequel! If you could find the inspiration to write, it would be really cool if you updated while on Thanksgiving break. Just saying ;)

NO JADEN NO!!! Why would he lie like that? I swear he has feelings for her. Well, you probably know best of anyone if they have feelings for each other. I still believe he does though! But to answer your question, yes, I would definitely read the sequel. Congrats on the Barnes & Nobles job, that sounds amazing!

AHHHH AN UPDATE!!!! And Dahlia finally opened up a bit and realized she can't do it on her own. That she needs to open up to people in order to get better. And maybe it'll help Mila in a way. But what I really want to know is what Millie is planning on telling Dahlia! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I know you have a lot on your plate so it'll probably be a little bit before you update, but that's okay. Just don't work yourself too hard.

I cant wait to read more! hope you update soon

Awwww poor Lily and her family. At least now we know how she ended up in the woods from the very beginning, and what drew her to the place where she thought Lily was taking her. And I'm glad that Jay was able to help her through this time. I start to miss everyone else sometimes when you're all up in Daliah's head. Hopefully Jay talking to Daliah in this chapter will help him with the things he has to deal with with Mila. Can't wait to see what sort of excitement the next chapter brings!

You updated the same chapter twice! haha I got excited thinking it was a double update buy alas it was only an accidental double post! haha Great chapter though! I wonder why Dahlia passed out!! and uh-oh trouble in mila and Jay land!

Im sure you hear this all the time but a romance with her and Jaden would be heaven! and not even a huge one! just a subtle gradual one! I mean they spend all tht time together even in this envorment or i suppose ESPECIALLY in this enviorment when emotions run high and you see the same people all the time something is bound to happen! just look at Jay and Mila (i think thts right) and also things have been too in the clear with the krugar sitch! too quiet, even with her hallucinations

WHO IS LILYYYY?!?! I just want to knowww! And I like Jaden in this one. It brings back some of Jaden when this story first started. Serious, to the point, and full o' suprises.
There is something that I would like to see happen with this story, but it's kind of off point, as far as the main characters are concerned. I'd like to see the relationship of Jay and Mila come to a point. I don't really want to say something specific, because I'd like to see what you do with it. Just, something other than this stalemate they are at.
Fantasic chapter, m'dear. And thank you for the mention in your author's note! I hope more people start commenting for you, this story definitely deserves it.

Great chapter c: I
d write more buuut im a little tipsy sooo it probably wouldnt make sense if i tryed to elaborate more than that aha
but whats the big reveal at the end? haha I've read all of the books that are currently out (Ive bene into this series since i wa slike a sophmore in high school, Im 21 now) and dont remember whats revealed when anymore haha

How could you even begin to question that chapter, it was great!! The last thing you'd expect from all that buildup is that Lily was all in her head. Then, of all people, JADEN finds her and reveals to her what was really going on. It was great! When she took the coat off Lily and it was just a body there, and you realized she was hallucinating or just all together a lot worse than she let onto be, I was literally staring at my screen with my mouth open. This is fantastic writing, please do not begin to doubt yourself.

Caught myself back up on the last couple chapters; Brilliant, my dear! The different sides of Dahlia that are unfolding is beautiful. It may sound a bit strange, but it'll be interesting to see how deep into this trance Dahlia lets herself go into. I'm sure it'll get real dark and twisty if she keeps letting herself deal with these nightmares on her own. I can't wait to see what's next! Also, just in case you don't update before, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

Ah I finished this, okay this is my last comment, but I just don't know what to do with myself now. Please update!