Wanderlust - Comments

Ah I finished this, okay this is my last comment, but I just don't know what to do with myself now. Please update!

Okay I know I just commented, but I have to explain how much I LOVE Dahlia and Jaden. Like they are the most adorable friends, the love/hate thing is perfection. I will just die if you don't let them get together at SOME point, even if i doesn't last. Oh please please please!

This. Story. Is. So. Amazing. I'm only on chapter fifteen, but I haven't been able to stop reading! Even when I'm away from my computer, I find myself thinking about Dahlia. This story is perfection.

This story is amazing!! I found the story and caught all the way up to the last chapter in one day! You are such a talented writer, keep it up lady!

yay i was so happy to see an update! i cant wait on the next one!!

Your updates always make me happy! Excited to see what happens next, good job and keep going! :)

yay i love the update :) i cant wait on the next one take your time writing and i hope you have fun writing it :)

omg i just read threw everything after i found your link threw your story blue moon and i love it i cant wait on the next chapter!!!! i am in love with blue moon and now this story as well! i hope you have fun writing :)

I just found this story and I'm already 16 chapters in, hahah. It's really interesting and I'm glad I found it. I like the character development and the build up is great. Keep up the good work! :D

What about Jay's story? or did I miss a chapter somehow?
other than that HOLY MOTHER OF FUCKING GOD!!!! WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED!?! Jaden is Kruger's SON?!?! Did NOT see that coming! and oh my god :c I totally inderstand him a hell of a lot better now! poor guy! and Millie! They had to watch their mother die and their Father!! and Constantine! :c That's so terrible! Outlawed interracial marriages?? bullshit man! His wife died for him and they killed his child! A CHILD! because of this! so terrible :c

What about Jay's story? or did I miss a chapter somehow?
other than that HOLY MOTHER OF FUCKING GOD!!!! WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED!?! Jaden is Kruger's SON?!?! Did NOT see that coming! and oh my god :c I totally inderstand him a hell of a lot better now! poor guy! and Millie! They had to watch their mother die and their Father!! and Constantine! :c That's so terrible! Outlawed interracial marriages?? bullshit man! His wife died for him and they killed his child! A CHILD! because of this! so terrible :c

OhmyGod! Mila! That poor girl! That is strength, completely different than any other type of strength! wow! Her story is awful and I just can't see anyone elses story being quite as terrible! I can't wait to hear them though! and I agree, the supporting characters back story is just as important! They shed light on the group dynamic and how life outside their little group is

nooo whhyyy would you give me a cliff hanger!?!?! whhyyyyy!!!!! Lol and a damn good one too!! I really like how she's withdrawn into herself, a very realistic way for her to handle it considering the memories she's getting. and I adore and appreciate how Dahlia thinks to herself how she "wants to be alone, but not feel alone" another very realistic tribute! One most authors skip over in the long run either picking one or the other! But why Did Kruger do this to her?!?! Does this have something to do with him coming into power?!? and what does Jaden want to talk to Dahlia about?!?! *Sigh* I seriously want them to end up together lmao but I just cant see that happening (although I fantasize that Jaden secretly attracted to Dahlia and doesnt know how to handle it or wnat to show it since he's so reserved and kind of a dick haha)

Love this, it's going great and I really like it!! Can't wait for the next chapter I'm excited!

Woot! Love it so far. I hope her and Jaden get together and stuff! Can't wait for more. :)

I honestly thought she was seeing a dead body floating towards her underwater at first! I was like "oh god, oh god, oh god, DEAD BODY!!!!" haha but even better than a dead body, it was a MEMORY!! yay!!!! I wonder if this is the memory of her tracker being ripped from her! and I read in the character page that Marcus used to be from within the gates? I wonder if he knows Dahlia and where she came from and why her tracker was removed and why she was dropped in the middle of the woods with no memory of who she was!! I'M EXCITED!!!! lol

You are 10 decently long chapters into it but I feel like nothing major has happened yet. I say go for it! The story could definitely use some pick up and some action and a new development! but that's just me. Go with what your gut says

Oh Snap!! Dahlia got some attitude! Haha in all honesty I would have done just that! I'd be more afraid of breaking Jaden's rules than of the threat of a bullet through my brain! xD She didn't DO anything either! he threatened her for no reason! I wonder what everyone else is going to think of what happened? Jaden seems to REALLY not like her too

your character development and dialogue is great, i really like this.

I think you should bring out a side that has a littel bite to it! She just showed that she can if irritated enough! and being alone with the brooding Jaden, well she might just get annoyed enough to snap at him a few time!