Pieces - Comments

Poor Zack,Amber is a biotch!!! I like this story can't wait for you too update..

Really great so far :) looking forward to more!!! Can't wait to see what happens with this story. I feel sorry for Zack!!

Love this already.

I'm loving this! Why the hell Zack is puttin up with Amberis beyond me. She's a cowbitch

I'm disappointed you're not gonna update as often as Catfish, but I hope you'll update this soon xx

Amber's a bitch. Zack is a dick and a pussy. Nothing is wrong with Violet. I actually like her.

oOoOoOo I like this girl shes got my kinda attitude! can't wait to see where you take this!

I absolutely cannot wait to see where this goes :)

This sounds like it's going to be another one of my favorite stories here on Mibba.

Oh this sounds like it's going to be a really interesting story =)

This wasn't at all what I expected, but I'm loving it none the less and I definitely can't wait to see where you take it.

I don't yet know how I feel about the protagonist, so I won't comment on that. But I do love Zacky's professional manner - being impressed by her personal responses instead of by the schools that she has been to. I just love that. XD

Will be waiting for more!

This has got LOADS of promise. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this and I hope you can update again very soon xx

Ooo, I love this. Can't wait to read more.

Even in THIS story Zack seems like an asshole, haha!
Oooh, I can't wait for more!

@ Haylie Jaed
Thank you. This is only my second story on Mibba, so I'm not a very popular author.

I've never read anything of yours (at least, your penname isn't familiar to me) but the summary for this has really drawn me in. Instant subscribe, and I can't wait to see the first chapter!

Can't wait for this!