Dang, that was intense! I love the Niall POV by the way :) update soon!
May 31st, 2013 at 05:22am
Can You Find Me? - Comments
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Why is he being such a fucking dick?!May 31st, 2013 at 03:48am
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Noooo!! :( I feel horrible for her! Update again soon!May 31st, 2013 at 03:27am
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I absolutely loved this! I like it wen you do Niall's POV. It really shows where they are in their so called relationship. I hate that he made her cry. I think my heart dropped along with hers. He makes me mad. Very mad. I'm glad he's finally realizing how stupid he was, and it was nice to see how much she was actually working at the relationship. It seemed to be less than that before this chapter. Great chapter. Update soon!May 31st, 2013 at 02:54am
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The Niall's point of view was cool. I obviously loved the chapter as you already know. Re-reading it I'm still so pissed at Niall and I like that you added the whole scene with Ayden wanting to go red. I like that. It's going to be interesting :)May 31st, 2013 at 02:35am
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sniff sniff so sad!May 29th, 2013 at 09:06am
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@ sandrashameless
Uh oh. That doesn't sound very good :/ I'm scared :'(May 29th, 2013 at 05:48am -
@ pattycake
lmaooooooMay 29th, 2013 at 01:42am -
I hate you with a freaking passion right now. I mean seriously, I go on vacation for the weekend and I come back to them being broken up, what is this crap? I am not okay with this and I'll make sure to let you know until they get back together. (lovely writing as always btw :) but seriously, this better get fixed asap.)May 29th, 2013 at 12:35am
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Ugh you dick, they broke uppppp );
I love this tho, keep writing !(:May 28th, 2013 at 08:13am -
@ imjustinlove
the party should be fun...May 28th, 2013 at 07:31am -
Gah! I don't know what to think. Impeccable writing, but horrid breakup. That's just downright harsh. Naill is pissing me off big time. I do love that she's still good with everyone else though. Update soon!May 28th, 2013 at 07:07am
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Another fabulous update, as always :) I cannot believe Niall broke up with her! This is definitely gonna be a drama filled sequel! Oh my God, if you still need a guinea pig I'm available :) update soon!May 28th, 2013 at 05:54am
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Who wouldn't love to to be chapter guinea pig!?! I would so do it unless you've already found someone! BTW great chapter. I can't believe he broke up with her but I understand why at the same time. But honestly she was actually trying and putting in the effort after she had the pregnancy scare. She had every right to be a little hesitant. Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens at the party!May 28th, 2013 at 04:38am
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Who wouldn't love to to be chapter guinea pig!?! I would so do it unless you've already found someone! BTW great chapter. I can't believe he broke up with her but I understand why at the same time. But honestly she was actually trying and putting in the effort after she had the pregnancy scare. She had every right to be a little hesitant. Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens at the party!May 28th, 2013 at 04:38am
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If you still need a chapter reader I'm up for it! :)May 28th, 2013 at 02:20am
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I would love to read the chapters before you post them! I always look forward to the updates!May 28th, 2013 at 12:35am
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I can't believe Niall broke up! They were such a good couple.
Can't wait for the next chapter :DMay 27th, 2013 at 11:37pm -
Omg! I can't believe he broke up either!! Can't wait for more!!May 27th, 2013 at 10:24pm
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If that was just the teaser I can't wait for the story to actually kick off;) can already tell it's going to be amazing:D keep up the fantabulous work xMay 27th, 2013 at 09:28pm
