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  • sandrashameless

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    @ imjustinlove
    gaaaaah thanks for telling me I'll fix it
    June 7th, 2013 at 02:41pm
  • kelceyarmstrong

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    ahhhhhh love this!!!
    June 7th, 2013 at 10:13am
  • actuallycapamerica

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    Gahhhhh! They're both so stupid!

    They should just get together again and be cool people, cause cool people are cool. And that's cool.

    Even though I don't really like what's going on (even though I secretly love how it's building) I liked this chapter. Only things is that you had a mistake with the italics. Half of the chapter is in italics. Just letting you know :)

    Update soon!
    June 7th, 2013 at 07:14am
  • k.louise

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    Awww come on. ):
    June 6th, 2013 at 03:50pm
  • brunettecutie04

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    Oh no this is just spiralling downhill. They need some more time I guess. Niall needs to calm his shit down it's honestly his fault they're in this mess. Gah, I can't wait till the next chapter.
    June 5th, 2013 at 04:03am
  • sandrashameless

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    @ WhoAreYouJudy
    i second that!
    June 5th, 2013 at 03:58am
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    Yo if she don't want Niall back, I'll take him lol.
    June 5th, 2013 at 02:57am
  • SpencerG

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    Oh my fucking glob! I'm crying! Just try to work it out guys! Please!
    June 5th, 2013 at 02:42am
  • sandrashameless

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    @ LadySyndra
    I'm just as curious as you are at this point lol
    June 2nd, 2013 at 03:04am
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    I wonder what sort of plans the boys will cook up to get Niall back together with Ayden lol
    June 2nd, 2013 at 02:59am
  • sandrashameless

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    @ Caitlynnnn
    right!
    June 1st, 2013 at 01:52am
  • sandrashameless

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    @ STREETWALKER
    oh haaay! thanks!
    June 1st, 2013 at 01:52am
  • STREETWALKER

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    Loooooove it!!!!!!!
    June 1st, 2013 at 01:25am
  • sandrashameless

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    @ WhoAreYouJudy
    ooooooooh lol yeah
    June 1st, 2013 at 12:45am
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    No no not you! I mean like damn I thought she was gonna be the one that broke up with him & I didn't expect Niall to ever act like that with her cause he seemed a bit clingy!
    June 1st, 2013 at 12:38am
  • sandrashameless

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    @ WhoAreYouJudy
    wait, what was? did i not explain their feelings well?
    May 31st, 2013 at 11:32pm
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    That was so misleading & out of character, I'm shocked.
    May 31st, 2013 at 11:08pm
  • Caitlynnnn

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    Niall :( smh dumb jerk who's so cute
    May 31st, 2013 at 01:29pm
  • k.louise

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    Fuuuuuck why are you playing with my emotions omg.

    I felt this chapter, yo.

    &&By the way, I like the Niall POVs in there, keep doing them ! Nice to know what's going on on both sides (:

    Keep it up, Love ya !
    May 31st, 2013 at 09:21am
  • sandrashameless

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    @ Krystal-Khaos
    typical guy
    May 31st, 2013 at 08:01am
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