You're still missing the commas and periods inside the quotation marks. And it's never "I seen." "I saw" or "I see" or even "I have seen" and "I had seen," yes.
I knew Geno was goin to hurt Sidney but Sidney has a point she is a grown woman and besides Geno u can't protect from everything she is goin to get tired of it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
So so good! It make sense for Geno to freak out but I think he'll come around. He knows Sid is a good guy. What the hell happened in Russia? will we find out on their date tonight?!?! Great chapter
I'm excited to see Sid and Eka's relationship develop. I love here relationship with Geno and their banter is fantastic and very realistic. They act exactly like real cousins would. I loved this, ;)
I'm excited to see Sid and Eka's relationship develop. I love here relationship with Geno and their banter is fantastic and very realistic. They act exactly like real cousins would. I loved this, ;)
I'm excited to see Sid and Eka's relationship develop. I love here relationship with Geno and their banter is fantastic and very realistic. They act exactly like real cousins would. I loved this, ;)
Oh sweet googly moogly tht was fucking sexy like damn but big cousin Geno isn't goin to be too happy when he finds out thts for damn sure anyhoo great chapter love this story already can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)