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  • AngelicWasteland;

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    oooo I'm liking this so far, the summary was great, you didn't give to much away, just what you needed too and the first chapter left me wanting to read more which is what you want! I'm a sucker for description and you gave plenty which I loved, I could picture the scenes in my head as I was reading which to me is always the sign of an excellent story! Can't wait to read more! Rec'd as promised and I sub'd aswell!
    June 23rd, 2013 at 12:28am
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    oooo I'm liking this so far, the summary was great, you didn't give to much away, just what you needed too and the first chapter left me wanting to read more which is what you want! I'm a sucker for description and you gave plenty which I loved, I could picture the scenes in my head as I was reading which to me is always the sign of an excellent story! Can't wait to read more! Rec'd as promised and I sub'd aswell!
    June 23rd, 2013 at 12:28am
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    @ unapalomayunaflor

    I'm bringing the sexy back to Mibba tehe
    June 6th, 2013 at 05:02am
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    I clicked on this with such excitement and then I find out YOU wrote it! Now, that is just perfect. OMGYES

    The awesomeness of this can't be described! I already know this is going to be a great read.
    June 6th, 2013 at 04:42am
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    @ viralstorm

    The first chapter should be up soon. I'm working out the kinks and I like to pre-write the first few chapters so make sure everything comes along great.
    June 2nd, 2013 at 04:48am
  • viralstorm

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    I'm a sucker for a good Supernatural story, so please post the first chapter of this soon. It sounds like it is going to be incredible, like everything you do.

    The layout is very simple, keeps the focus on the picture and the story itself. The picture isn't a hint at what the story might be about, which is nice. I had time to take in the whole layout, then begin the summary and I had a moment of AHA! Haha.

    You really drew me in with the summary. Sometimes I read summaries that are like. "So and so moved to California, and met Harry Lawerence. Her life changed forever, they fell in love."

    Which leaves me like...seriously? You just gave away the whole story and left no room for me to want to click that chapter button. You ruined it. COME ON! So bravo on your summary writing skills. I most definitely want to read this when you post the first chapter.

    Which should be soon, or I might faint.
    June 2nd, 2013 at 04:46am