Father and Daughter - Comments

Super great update and I love the cliff-hanger! Please update soon!!!!

OMG!!!! update sooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The update is amazing:)

OOOO. I need to know what happens! More more more please!

I really liked this chapter. Mr. C seems like one of those characters that you just have to know more about even though he's dark, mysterious and a bit... off. (If you know what I mean)
Please update soon!!

No. Stahp. You're overwhelming me with amazeballs stories. This is just no. Way too incredible. I adore it so much. With this and My Sadist King, I might begin to love like serial killers.

I love you for this.

Dan is great, I don't want him to be a bad person! I'll be really sad.

I'm interested to see what's going to happen with the teacher, since he knows, I assume, about her father, or something. I can't wait to see where that goes.

And with Logan. Ugh he's such a jerk. He needs to not be free! I hope Mina will be okay, But I get the feeling that Dan is going to take care of him. Good, Dan needs to, Logan is awful.

I really like Marnie as a character and I want her to have good things happen to her. Keep updating!

Wow, so many things happened in this chapter.

I really wonder what the connection between the teacher and Mina is going to be. I wonder what he meant by saying "So it really is you"...?

Also Logan is on the loose?! Wow, did not see that coming.

Please update soon because I'm dying to know what happens next!

Thank you so much for updating this lovely story! But now you've made me even more anxious, Nicole! Ughhhh. So I'm really, really glad Mina shares a hate of Shakespeare with me for sure. But it's so sad that her dad killed herself ugh! Dan is such a good guy despite his creepy hobby. Also I WANT TO KNOW THE CONNECTION BETWEEN THE TEACHER AND MINA COME ON NICOLE! This comment is everywhere, I know, and I'm sorry but I'm glad Mina is making friends! I hope she makes more as the story goes on because she definitely deserves some!

Ugh, Nicole. I wish you would stop being so awesome and writing awesome chapters like this but I mean, you're amazing and this story is amazing and I'm so Into it and it needs to be updated. hop to it, girl!

This story is so lovely. I am both oddly and excited and nervous for Dan to start killing people. Poor Mina. But lucky mina? She gets a family but at the same time gets a world of complication. That's what makes you and this story so lovely.

I'm so sorry about the struggles you're going through. I hope everything ends up going your way in the end. For the time being, work on being the very best you there can be. Take some time and watch some good movies, read some good books, do some good things. You'll be okay darling, even if you're not where you want to be.

I adore this story. At first, when I began reading this story, I thought it was going to be some sort of incestual type thing, but I'm so glad it's not. I was a bit wary of how kind Dan is to Mina and you can tell how much he loves her, (which led me to think that some sick things were happening), but reading the latest chapter with Asshat Logan, you can see how Mina and Dan's relationship has progressed. I also love how innocent Mina is, it breaks my heart but it'll be interesting to see how this changes when Dan shows his serial killer side. Your writing is amazing and despite the personal stuff going on, I thought this chapter was brilliant and it totally made me want to punch Logan and hug Dan at the same time, even though we know he's going to be killin' people soon. This is without a doubt, one of my favourite stories on here!

First off, I'm sorry about your troubles in life and I hope things start turning up for you very soon :).

I just love how much their relationship is progressing through the story. You can tell how much they start caring for each other as time goes on and I find it so endearing. I know he has a horrid past time, but he's such a sweet guy and so good to her. The whole Logan thing made me so angry but I like how you played that into the story to lead to them finally saying they love each other; which was such an amazing moment. Logan is a douche, but it brought out how much Dan loves Mina and I love that.

Although all of your chapters are magnificently well written, this chapter seemed to astound me even more. The way you describe things using personification is marvelous; i absolutely love it. You're so talented, can't you share with the rest of us ;D? Anyway, I love the update so much and I can't wait for chapter 7 to come soon!

Man Logan is a complete a-hole! But it's a good thing that Mina told Dan what happened and he showed Logan not to mess with his daughter. I wonder if Dan is happy to see Mina relay on him and how much she has grown to see him as her father. You are an excellent writer and I can't wait for more!!!!

This was a really amazing chapter and I felt so bad for Mina. Thank God for Dan.

Well Nicole, despite everything that has been happening you still write amazingly, like honestly. You ought to take that sorry this chapter sucks out of your author's note. I've got to say, if there's one thing you know how to do, it's hook readers. I mean, I read the majority of your stories and no matter how bad you say a chapter is or how it isn't your best it still leaves me so breathless and wanting to read so much more. I love that about your writing.

So anyways, onto this update. I LOVED it.
I honestly thought, "Ohh Logan and Mina " and then I was like, "This isn't kids stuff, they're not hangin' out, some shit's bout to go down." So it wasn't a huge surprise to me when he started bein' all gross and stuff. But when she got back to the hotel with Dan. Gosh, that was great. I was like Girl, you are so good at writing this stuff. I could see it ALL. ALL OF IT. Gosh I feel like it's a movie and I just got stuck hitting the pause button. You reeeaaaaaaallllllllllyyyyyyy need to update more often. I won't hate you if you don't, cause you're awesome but still. You leave me wanting more and I don't understand how people aren't blowing up these comments. It's amazing. I'm gonna try to rec this again, and you because everyone should know of your greatness. c:

Gosh, I love this story. I'm so excited when I come online and have seen you updated! Poor, sweet Mina.

This was a great update.

I'm so glad i took Latin for three years because I feel empowered to know what the woman was saying to Mina. :) Great update!

I'm enthralled with this story. I really like the plot line, and the way that Dan cares for Mina. This is one of the best and most original stories I've seen here.