We're Only Watching The Skies - Comments

@ selfella
Should be updating pretty soon! Another fic basically took control of my life, but I'm attempting to write another chapter right now for this one. Thanks for hanging with me! Sorry for the wait. :(

Please update!!!!

Loving this! Update! :)

Loving this! Update! :)

@ AJsDrumstick
PUSHY MUCH? hahah I love you twin.

@ onlythegooddieyoung
We get a bit more explanation in the next chapter. ;) I'm really glad you liked this chapter! I had such a tough time writing it, I'm just glad it's over. lol

You know I love it, girl!! WRITE MORE NOW, OK? NOW!

Oh, dear. CONFLICT. Hahaha. That's not good at all.

This chapter was really well-written, and I was glad that we got to see a little more of the relationship between both Fallon and Louis and Fallon and Arlie. :)

Did someone slip something into her drink or something? 'Cause she seemed to get drunk enough to pass out REALLY quickly. Hahaha. I was proud of Louis for being so protective of her, though. God, that boy is winning me over more and more every chapter. ;)

I can't wait to read more! :D

Pleeeeaaaseeeee update! Love the story :)

@ onlythegooddieyoung
Oh! And I forgot to mention. My best friend @AJsDrumstick made the banner and created the layout. She's so much better at that stuff than I am.

@ onlythegooddieyoung
Thanks so much for the review. I appreciate posts like this, because it shows me how I can better it. And yes, the relationship is moving fast for a reason. That shows up in the next chapter. But really, thank you so much!!!

Okay, so my first impression was that the layout and the banner are REALLY awesome. They made me interested right away and made me want to read the story itself.

In the beginning, I noticed there were a couple of things that made the writing sound a little young, like saying "This person..." when the rest of the story is in past tense or referring directly to the reader using the word "you". So I'd probably change those a little bit to clean up the flow.

There are a couple of grammar things, too, but nothing really major that detracted from the story itself. Also, it'd probably be much better if you put spaces between paragraphs, since it's really intimidating to click on a chapter and see a wall of text. Hahahaha.

But onto the story itself: I really like it! I think the story is a cute one, and while I think the relationship is moving kind of quickly, I think that's what you had in mind and that you're planning to use it that way, which makes it fine. I can't wait to see the characters and the relationships between them develop throughout the story!

I love this so much!!!

love it! Please update soooon!!! :)

Louis you jerk! Ugh! GAH! Update sooon!

omg.
omg.

YEEEE -dances- UPDATE AGAIN GURL.

Yaaaay love it :)

@ AJsDrumstick
Of course you do. :) Thank you!

@ hollyanne04
Aw thank you so much! I appreciate the feedback. Means a lot to me. :)