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  • thesolopolo

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    Thanks so much! Cocky Louis is just so.. gah. Couldn't pass it up. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
    June 3rd, 2013 at 11:14pm
  • Bangarang!

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    This is an excellent first chapter, you have a great writing style, easy to follow, I didn't find any mistakes, very well written. ANYWAYS! I LOVE THIS! I love Peter Pan and I love Louis so you get ten gold starts for this!! I like the fact that he is cocky and arrogant, as much as I love funny sweet Louis I love me some Cocky Louis In Love This is a great first chapter and I can't wait to see where you go with it please update soon.
    ~ subscribed :D
    June 3rd, 2013 at 03:46am
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    Wow! This is really good!! :) It's really unique. I'm friends with Laura, by the way. :)
    But I LOVE this story and it's only on Chapter One. I can't wait to see where you take this! :)
    June 3rd, 2013 at 01:03am
  • invaderpayne

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    I love it Kaitie! :)
    June 2nd, 2013 at 04:58am
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