Bane - Comments

I think, with time, she'll get better, especially with James by her side. And about telling the boys, I'm not entirely too sure about that.

:D This story is amazing, I love it so much. I love that they're finally with each other and not fighting all the time. James proposing would be amazing ;)

Great update I think that was so cute!!! Can't wait for more!!!

i love this chapter so much! it's so cute. i can't wait for another update i'm sure you will think of something clever for the next chapter, if you haven't already

@ Cinco de Jenna
awh thank you!

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another update today would be awesome if you got around to it! i can't wait to hear the good news. I like the fact that her mom is a bitch because I hate reading stories where everything is perfect and the girl and guy both live a perfect life because lets face it, that never happens

has to be one of my favourite comments I've ever read.

Damn. Her mother has issues...serious issues. I can't even imagine what she's gonna do next.

another update today would be awesome if you got around to it! i can't wait to hear the good news. I like the fact that her mom is a bitch because I hate reading stories where everything is perfect and the girl and guy both live a perfect life because lets face it, that never happens

I liked that update I knew since the last chapter shit was gonna hit the fan with her mother. I like how James' teammates are now like her older broskis. Can't wait until next chapter great writing

I can't wait for the drama with her mom.. But I think its really cute that James and the boys are taking care and protecting Holden from her evil mom

Well shit son. She has a crazy ass bitch for a mother. I love that the relationship between James and Holden is improving.

Oh shit...Holden's mom...

Oh shit. I don't even know what to think about her mom being there.

I love this story way too much for you to change it. I think it's going great. Don't give up on it just yet?

This story is good!! Don't fret!! Don't change anything!!! Love this story and the relationship with Holden and James!!!

i love this story just like it is! don't change anything! another update today if you could got a chance tonight would be awesome! i love this story, it's my favorite story!!

I love this story!!

I just love this chapter! Holden's so happy!

GREAT UPDATES! Holden is getting pretty sexual around James. Love it.

I feel so bad Holden is just an emotional wreck who misses her father greatly and dispises her mom I wish she could just see how much James loves her like adbgksndldn