Bane - Comments

I just found this and while I have NO IDEA AT ALL about hockey I still like it, its a nice concept and Im looking forward to reading more.

I feel so bad for Holden :( update!

@Crosby'sBabyGirl I couldn't agree more.

It really pains how much I want them to be together.

I can't wait to see what happens. I want them to be a couple so badly

I hope they become a couple but not now they need to become better friends

Wasn't expecting that either, but I hope they get over their differences and get together sooner rather than later.

@ TallyHallFan1
Oh, no, no that's not mean! I'll tell Holden and James that, don't worry ;P

Wow, I was not expecting that, but I'm not complaining. Hopefully afterwards, they will confess how much they actually like each other and stop being so stubborn. Also, James should tell his brothers so I can laugh some more on their banter.

I feel like I'm gonna be mean, but I have to say something.

They both need to get over themselves, Holden needs to suck it up, James is obviously in love with her and I just want them to get together!

Ohhh that was some, hot, heated, angry sexy times!!! What will happen next??!! Update soon please!!! I can't wait!! :)

oh yeay!! They kissed!! I can't wait to see what will happen next - please update soon!!!

Love this story and love where its heading! cant wait for more! They kissed yay!!!

@ Cinco de Jenna
oh my god thank you for that second update!!! sorry it took so long for me to get back to you, i was busy most of the night, but oh my god either way i loved it. this is my favorite story right now.

THEY KISSED!! Omg, I'm speechless right now. Maybe James could stay with her for the night? P.S, I love Little Mix and the banter between the Neal siblings.

@ Hockeyfan_199287
They're all lyrics from Little Mix's album DNA. I'll write the song in the author's note at the bottom for you.

I'm already loving this story! My only request is that you list what the lyrics are at the beginning of every update, I really wanna know what is at the beginning of part two :3 Other than that, amazing, i'm really satisfied

@ m24cpuck
I'll see what can be done, no promises, but maybe two updates tomorrow!

@ dreamerforever
I like your thinking.

I love this so much and don't want to wait for tomorrow to read more. If you have free time you should update it again tonight. Please? I love this story