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  • NaiveDove

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    I just found this and while I have NO IDEA AT ALL about hockey I still like it, its a nice concept and Im looking forward to reading more.
    June 16th, 2013 at 02:28pm
  • Carolynbennerr

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    I feel so bad for Holden :( update!
    June 15th, 2013 at 11:41pm
  • dreamerforever

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    @Crosby'sBabyGirl I couldn't agree more.
    June 12th, 2013 at 06:48am
  • Crosby'sBabyGirl

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    It really pains how much I want them to be together.
    June 12th, 2013 at 05:22am
  • m24cpuck

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    I can't wait to see what happens. I want them to be a couple so badly
    June 11th, 2013 at 04:52am
  • Carolynbennerr

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    I hope they become a couple but not now they need to become better friends
    June 11th, 2013 at 04:20am
  • dreamerforever

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    Wasn't expecting that either, but I hope they get over their differences and get together sooner rather than later.
    June 11th, 2013 at 02:40am
  • Cinco de Jenna

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    @ TallyHallFan1
    Oh, no, no that's not mean! I'll tell Holden and James that, don't worry ;P
    June 11th, 2013 at 12:00am
  • Crosby'sBabyGirl

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    Wow, I was not expecting that, but I'm not complaining. Hopefully afterwards, they will confess how much they actually like each other and stop being so stubborn. Also, James should tell his brothers so I can laugh some more on their banter.
    June 10th, 2013 at 11:44pm
  • AlohaBonjour1112

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    I feel like I'm gonna be mean, but I have to say something.

    They both need to get over themselves, Holden needs to suck it up, James is obviously in love with her and I just want them to get together!
    June 10th, 2013 at 11:38pm
  • kartal1984

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    Ohhh that was some, hot, heated, angry sexy times!!! What will happen next??!! Update soon please!!! I can't wait!! :)
    June 10th, 2013 at 11:33pm
  • kartal1984

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    oh yeay!! They kissed!! I can't wait to see what will happen next - please update soon!!!
    June 10th, 2013 at 03:40pm
  • realdeal18

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    Love this story and love where its heading! cant wait for more! They kissed yay!!!
    June 10th, 2013 at 06:29am
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    @ Cinco de Jenna
    oh my god thank you for that second update!!! sorry it took so long for me to get back to you, i was busy most of the night, but oh my god either way i loved it. this is my favorite story right now.
    June 10th, 2013 at 05:54am
  • Crosby'sBabyGirl

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    THEY KISSED!! Omg, I'm speechless right now. Maybe James could stay with her for the night? P.S, I love Little Mix and the banter between the Neal siblings.
    June 10th, 2013 at 05:03am
  • Cinco de Jenna

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    @ Hockeyfan_199287
    They're all lyrics from Little Mix's album DNA. I'll write the song in the author's note at the bottom for you.
    June 10th, 2013 at 04:21am
  • Hawkey Avs-Pens

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    I'm already loving this story! My only request is that you list what the lyrics are at the beginning of every update, I really wanna know what is at the beginning of part two :3 Other than that, amazing, i'm really satisfied
    June 10th, 2013 at 04:12am
  • Cinco de Jenna

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    @ m24cpuck
    I'll see what can be done, no promises, but maybe two updates tomorrow!
    June 10th, 2013 at 02:01am
  • Cinco de Jenna

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    @ dreamerforever
    I like your thinking.
    June 10th, 2013 at 02:00am
  • m24cpuck

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    I love this so much and don't want to wait for tomorrow to read more. If you have free time you should update it again tonight. Please? I love this story
    June 9th, 2013 at 11:58pm
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