Living with Alex Gaskarth - Comments

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I only read the first five chapters, but I did enjoy reading. The introduction was good, it basically got right to the point and didn't drag things out like some stories do. I have to admit, I don't know that much about Alex Gaskarth other than the fact that he's in All Time Low but I do like the way that you've written his character. You've done a good job of setting up their relationship. I'm assuming that it will be one of those love/hate relationships, which is always fun to read.

One thing to be careful of is using the wrong punctuation. I only noticed it a few times in the chapters that I read, but it's just something to be mindful of. And it might be a good idea to edit errors and expand on adjectives so the same words aren't being used repeatedly. Other than that, I think you've done a good job so far. But looking at the last couple comments, it seems this story hasn't been updated in over a year or so. I hope you continue writing though. Like I said, this had a great start :)

Take care!

Hi *waves* I'm here from comment swap.
I only read the first five chapters, but I did enjoy reading. The introduction was good, it basically got right to the point and didn't drag things out like some stories do. I have to admit, I don't know that much about Alex Gaskarth other than the fact that he's in All Time Low but I do like the way that you've written his character. You've done a good job of setting up their relationship. I'm assuming that it will be one of those love/hate relationships, which is always fun to read.
One thing to be careful of is using the wrong punctuation. I only noticed it a few times in the chapters that I read, but it's just something to be mindful of. And it might be a good idea to edit errors and expand on adjectives so the same words aren't being used repeatedly. Other than that, I think you've done a good job so far. But looking at the last couple comments, it seems this story hasn't been updated in over a year or so. I hope you continue writing though. Like I said, this had a great start :)

Take care!

One thing that I had a problem understanding is if Blake was a girl or a boy. Yes you do have a photo of her on the main part of the story, but if someone was to just buy this book and they did not have that information they would have to make a guess until it is stated else where in the story. Another thing is I didn't know who Alex Gaskarth was, but if this was published as a fanfic the person would most likely know who he is. Other than that you put great detail in your story, I could make a mental image of exactly what they both were doing in their conversation.

This is some pretty decent material. There's a few things you could work on, especially how often you seem to use the wrong punctuation mark. It hasn't happened too much, it's just something you should work on. That, and you should also work on expanding your knowledge of adjectives. Besides that, it's a pretty decent story.

you need to update!!!<3

Update!!!!!!!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS =D

This story NEEDS to be updated!

Chelsea is such a bitch! Update soooooon!

That bitch! Please update sooooooon.

PLEEEAAASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!

AHHH! I love it! update soon <3

oh my god that is so cute :')

Yes! I thought her mom was gonna be difficult about it it! Loved the update! :)

I thought she was gonna kick him out!!! But this chapter was super amazing and cute and I loved it. Update soon.

Awwwwwwwwwwwww. So cute. But that Chelsea girl is the bitch that needs to back off.

DRAMA LLAMA! I like it XD so please update again soon.

Ahhhh! Whats she gonna do?!

OK NOW I NEED ANOTHER UPDATE WITH THAT LITTLE PLOT TWIST AT THE END. but you just updated so i have to wait *sobs* I LOVE THIS STORY TO DEATH UGH.

super cute! update soon <3

Loved the chapter. It was adorable! :D