I saw this in comment swap and I was like omg, Alex Gaskarth. I used to be a huge All Time Low fan back in my Hot Topic phase and since then, I haven't really listened to them.
Anyway, I like how you started off the story. It pulled me in as the reader. I can understand Blake's opinion about taking Alex in. It must suck to have someone invade your house like that. But this is a really, really cute story. Continue because I look forward to seeing where this goes. :)
This is adorable, really! I love the layout by the way, it's really pretty. I like the idea of this and the way you started off, it grabbed my attention straight away.
One thing I would say is that there are a few grammatical mistakes and in one chapter you said 'offered to help my mother' while it was Alex's POV so I think you might have meant Karen.
Your descriptions were very good! I like the way you write as well, update soon!
Wow, this is so good! Definitely an original take on the normal fan fic. I love it! I don’t usually read ATL fan fics because I don’t often listen to them ( used to be a serious fan, but I haven’t kept up ;_; ), but I found myself quite giddy reading this one. Rec and subbed! I love love love it, keep it coming!
Comment swap has been very kind to me lately :) Alex's parents, I don't like them and Alex has every right not to like them either :) Blake, she seems to be holding a big grudge against Alex and I want it removed because Alex is adorable! Since there's just two chapter there's not much to go off of, but it sounds pretty good so far!