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  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    June 12th, 2013 at 09:03pm
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    Great story, very interesting. The family Christmas seems fun, loved their Xmas gifts for each other.
    June 12th, 2013 at 09:05am
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    Great story, very interesting. The family Christmas seems fun, loved their Xmas gifts for each other.
    June 12th, 2013 at 09:04am
  • Dance2muse

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    This last chapter was amazing! Although I do find almost too much time when their not communicating but I LOVE their presents to each other! I could not think of anything more perfect and you did an amazing job describing both presents so they are easy to picture. Hopefully she'll be in Pittsburgh soon!
    June 12th, 2013 at 03:48am
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    @ annab3
    Haha! Glad you liked it. As for a proposal, he's got to get her to consider a move first. We'll have to see what happens! Thanks for reading!
    June 12th, 2013 at 03:36am
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    @ dudeamanda
    Thanks, Amanda. You're a doll!
    June 12th, 2013 at 03:35am
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    @ Thatmom
    Thank you so much! Love is a strong sentiment. Freaking love is even better!
    June 12th, 2013 at 03:35am
  • annab3

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    This is my favorite chapter so far;)) chapter 11
    I just cant wait for Sidney to propose to Bronwyn. Hopefully soon:)))
    June 12th, 2013 at 03:08am
  • dudeamanda

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    love the new update!!!! i honestly can't get enough of your writing!!!
    June 12th, 2013 at 01:05am
  • Thatmom

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    It's official ...... I freaking love this story.
    June 11th, 2013 at 11:49pm
  • hockeychick37

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    you may be bummed but im not! Bruins all the wayyyyyyy haha....update soon!
    June 10th, 2013 at 03:12pm
  • CourtLynWriter

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    @ think think think. @ AednBat Thank you both very much. I take pride in every word I write, fanfic or otherwise. I appreciate it!
    June 10th, 2013 at 04:54am
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    @ MoMo_92
    You and me both, sister.
    June 10th, 2013 at 04:53am
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    @ Jordyn4
    Thank you! I really enjoy delving into their conversations. I'm glad you enjoy FictionSid as well. Just trying to capture a different side I suppose. Smile
    June 10th, 2013 at 04:52am
  • Dance2muse

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    This was my favorite chapter!!!! They were so great together and I love the banter they have going! I'm really looking forward to Wyn meeting some of the guys on the team. Can't wait to see what comes next!
    June 9th, 2013 at 06:47pm
  • Jordyn4

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    I love the way Bronwyn and Sidney interact. They are so playful and fun. I also really like the way you have written Sidney. It is different from most stories.
    Can't wait to read more!
    June 9th, 2013 at 01:02am
  • MoMo_92

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    Sidney Crosby gives me goosebumps in the most greatest way ever especially when he laughs or has tht sexy vibe goin on I just squeal and fangirl a little, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    June 7th, 2013 at 08:28pm
  • burn fast glow long.

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    I love love love how you write this story! Your writing style is really nice, and I your characterization is awesome; your characters are far from flat, and you don't subscribe to the usual stereotypes that people use when they're writing, which is a breath of fresh air :) I can't wait to see what you have in the next update!
    June 7th, 2013 at 05:24am
  • AednBat

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    This is really well written, which is refreshing.
    June 6th, 2013 at 09:29pm
  • hockeychick37

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    loved this! update soon!
    June 6th, 2013 at 07:18pm