This last chapter was amazing! Although I do find almost too much time when their not communicating but I LOVE their presents to each other! I could not think of anything more perfect and you did an amazing job describing both presents so they are easy to picture. Hopefully she'll be in Pittsburgh soon!
@ Jordyn4 Thank you! I really enjoy delving into their conversations. I'm glad you enjoy FictionSid as well. Just trying to capture a different side I suppose.
This was my favorite chapter!!!! They were so great together and I love the banter they have going! I'm really looking forward to Wyn meeting some of the guys on the team. Can't wait to see what comes next!
I love the way Bronwyn and Sidney interact. They are so playful and fun. I also really like the way you have written Sidney. It is different from most stories. Can't wait to read more!
Sidney Crosby gives me goosebumps in the most greatest way ever especially when he laughs or has tht sexy vibe goin on I just squeal and fangirl a little, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
I love love love how you write this story! Your writing style is really nice, and I your characterization is awesome; your characters are far from flat, and you don't subscribe to the usual stereotypes that people use when they're writing, which is a breath of fresh air :) I can't wait to see what you have in the next update!