The Tabletop Talk - Comments

I’m here too from the comment swap. I think first thing I noticed was the layout. I know the others have already pointed it out, but I just have a different comment on it. I think you should make the writing a different color from the black background so it’ll be easier to read. I found myself having trouble focusing on the story when the words seemingly blended in with its background. But, that can be easily fixed.

As for the story, I really like it. The tension at the end really made me want to figure out what the heck happened a year ago. It pulled me in. I think you have a really nice story ahead of you. Nice job.

I'm here from comment swap. When i have writers block i take my main characters and put them in my favorite book and write that. It get me writing but also helps with ideas. But only works if you have a plot in mind for story you have writers block for.

Anywho back to business. I really enjoyed reading it. Not because of the plot, or even the story. I got my kicks from the characters. There seem realistic and connectable.

There are a few little mistakes here and there like, missing commas and "" marks.

Otherwise it was really good.

Hey! I'm here from comment swap! First, writer's block is AWFUL. AHHH I hate it! Don't worry though, it'll get better! Promise! It got better for me! I like your story! It's original and creative, but your layout should be original and creative so it can reflect on your writing! Yeah, sometimes making a layout is tough, so just go to the stories tab and click layouts! You'll be able to find a really nice layout for your story! Keep writing and I'll keep reading! Xoxoxoxo
-Maddie!

@ Strange Sort Of Evil
Thanks for the comment! I'm still trying to figure out the layout; I know it's pretty bad right now. Thanks for reading. :)

Here from comment swap.

I like the direction your heading in with this story, it seems like there are a lot of places you could take this. As for the plot, I think it's strong, and original which is always good.

I don't like your layout, that's the first thing I see as a reader and it didn't draw me in at all. So work on that could be useful.

I spotted a few mistakes here and there with spelling and grammar, but nothing huge. Overall I like it
I hope that writers block ends soon, because I'm waiting for more