Death Valley. - Comments

Awwww. I love this sory! Usually, when I see a story based off of "16 Candles...," I dont read it. Cause it just reminds me of Twilight. But, I'm super glad that I read yours! Now, I LOVE vampires. I think they're lovable now that I saw Patrick as one. Haha. :)) Update soon! I wanna keep reading! :))

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I'll try and clear things up here then. Although, Andy did kind of say it best. Felicia's dad is sort of 'almighty'. He was one of the first vampires in the lineage so he's really exceptionally powerful. Enough to possess his own son. Selfish enough to use his son as a pawn to take out his enemies. Rory realized this, tried to warn them, ultimately failed. Pete's goal was to attempt to shake the man from Rory's mind and it worked; Rory made a choice to leave to protect them all. His dad can only glean very little information and for the moment, has no idea where they are. Tiny spoiler: Patrick has a little gift of his own that might be touched on next chapter.

I liked it, but I'm slightly confused. Still awesome though!

Not going to lie I'm a little bit confused, it was brilliant but im a little bit confused

This is amazing!!! I'm in love, great job.(: please update soon!!

Really really good :) Update soon!!! I want to know whats happening to her brother :D

really enjoying - another update soon please!

Trust Joe to let all that light in. its a good job they were only sleeping haha. I am so glad you're back I've missed you

I love it! Please please please update!

love it! Patrick makes such a good vampire

Lol the way that training session ended was great

So Beckett worked or works for their dad... Interesting

I love her and Patrick's relationship it's so cute!!! I feel bad for Pete he helped kill Beckett too. Where is his fame and glory? lol jk but the story is really good and awesome

Aww Patrick was all tormented by what he had to do. I love him as a vampire. I'm wondering what in earth will happen next

This just keeps getting better and Better. I wonder if Fee will wake up vampire or human

I seemed to have tuned in right before shit hit the fan! I love the story so far, and I can't wait til your next update!

I love the twist too! In most of these fanfics the person added in gets taken so I was happy to see Patrick to get taken. So exitced for the next chapter(:

I'm in love with this story. It's incredibly well written. I feel like I'm actually there watching all this transpire in front of me. Well done. I hope you update this soon. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next!

you just took it to a whole new level. I love that twist, absolutely love it. I can't wait to see what they're going to do to get Patrick back, it's great!

If you make someone die or Fee and Patrick get separated from each other i will cry. I mean that, I will cry.