Death Valley. - Comments

it is really good!!^_^

It may have been filler but it was good filler, it was good to see them all happy and just being themselves.

Now I'm at my parents I can comment properly.

Rory's "death" was really quite violent, but if he really did plan that, I can't believe he put his own sister in that much danger. And Felicia being completely stuck was brilliant, I love how Patrick had to really go into her head to get her back

That had to be the best chapter of this story so far!

I love this!

Patrick and Fee are so cute together! I volunteer to take Pete ;) Keep up the amazing writing! I cannot wait to see how this all pans out :)

Their relationship is cute, and I live how dark Patrick's room is. I'm glad she spoke to someone

Its great how you can just tell something big is going to happen

Pleaaaase don't stop this story. Entirely too good to quit.

This has gotten off to a great start, I love the detail and how there is seriousness mixed with funny and so on. It's going to be one heck of a great story