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@ lmurmur
I update every Friday so only three days left! :)

AH please update!

I need to know what's going on!

I need to know what's going on!

Dang it, John! Stop being so stubborn and just listen to her. Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

Okay, this is now one of my favorite chapters. I love how they're fighting it out instead of manning the fuck up and discussing the whole thing, their immaturity is hilarious especially John in the van. "How will you talk about me if I'm there?" "What mood I'm fine! Fantastic actually" and the whole sleeping with each other pansy John thing. I can't wait for them to get back together but I also enjoy them fighting; if they keep it up and it becomes normal, soon the guys won't feel awkward about it haha they will probably just tease them about it or whatever. It's funny, though I feel about Everly crying! Can't wait for the next!

AGH SO MUCH DRAMA

I also agree! I def want to hear the story of Evie and Joel. Like in a flashback maybe? Either way, damnit John! You need to just believe Evie and be happy again!

John, you pussy (sorry), why don't you believe her? Kennedy, you are forgiven. Garrett is só perfect, I wish I had a best friend like him. And Everly can't give up, things will be fine. Plus, what happened between her and Joel? They always mention that, but I want to know the whole story.

@ everdeen
maybe I should add that into the story! haha

@ ohnana.
Ah thank you so much! I'm glad you think that.

oh my! that escalated quickly. But I can relate to John so hard right now and my heart is sinking about it. Ahh I can not deal with it.

The moment between her and Kennedy was nice, because I honestly didn't want to see them butt heads anymore.

Garrett is really good at being very short about things, but making a rather large point at the same time.

And that fight? Oh man, deja vu in my life. This story just keeps getting better and better.

I am seriously about to cry. John's heart is breaking. Everly's heart is breaking. My heart is breaking for them. It's just too much emotion. Both of them did things that were wrong but they just need to apologize and get back together, dang it!

I loveeeee the realism of this story!!! and I love the fact that you didn't have John prove his love to Evie by announcing her name to their fans during a concert like most nova stories do!!! kudos <3

I THOUGHT THEY WERE FINALLY MAKING PROGRESS. AWW. You broke my heart. :(

John, i have a song for you "why you only call me when you're high" hahaha I bet that if they were face to face, they would scream at each other, then make out. Kennedy's speech was so thoughtful, he just cares too much, like a typical older brother. John's drunken speech tho... He is so vulnerable behind that badass attitude. I believe that's not the end.

I hope this isn't the end! I do like that they're mad though, it should make their reunion more interesting.

love for kennedy restored! of course he's just looking out for her. he must have felt it was on him since he started the whole revenge thing. still, i'm completely on john's side on this one. he was so vulnerable and she just left, so i can't blame him for acting this way. i'm so thrilled to read what happens next!

AHHH! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.

...Sorry for being obnoxious, I'm just dying from anticipation.

Like Everly, I can't stay mad at Kennedy hahaha I'm glad they made up! Though it's a bad move on everly's part, John is too stubborn for his own good. I can't wait to see what happens when the guys are home, I have a feeling john's going to be bitter still and more fights like the phone conversation will happen! But it's cute that he still listened to her and went to Pat even though he claims he hates her. He's so whipped it's funny.