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  • discoveringclouds

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    @ LettersToNormandy
    Hey! Just a quick message to let you know this story has an ending ^_^
    March 29th, 2015 at 07:43am
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    @ LettersToNormandy
    Omg bread pudding is like my favourite dessert! So thick and wonderfully smooth dessert!

    It's Eid today so happy Eid! The day of celebration after the fasting month of Ramadan :) I'm so excited. I really hope my aunt made bread pudding.

    Thanks for the edits. That really makes a difference. I fixed it and tried to fix ahead somewhat as well. Let me know all these things if you can :)
    August 8th, 2013 at 07:38pm
  • LettersToNormandy

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    Just a heads up while I noticed it right off the top of my head, in "Heaven" you wrote "You're own real estate reserved..." I think you meant to use "Your" instead. Just a heads up!
    August 7th, 2013 at 06:01am
  • LettersToNormandy

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    So I'm on chapter three at the moment and wanted to comment on some things before I forgot.

    A. you mentioned bread pudding at the end of the last chapter. I don't think you understand how much I love bread pudding and how awesome it is to see it mentioned somewhere.

    B. I like Sara so far. Perfect characters annoy me; and she isn't perfect. That's what makes her interesting. That's what makes me want to keep reading. She isn't perfect and she knows it. She admits she's manipulative, and how she was able to use her persuasive gifts for personal gains that ended up crashing around her. I love that. It's very... real. Anyways, back to reading.
    August 7th, 2013 at 05:45am
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    @ Ayesha C
    Thank you for reading the story Ayesha. It's so important to me that you have stuck it through and read it and enjoyed the Islamic aspects of it!

    I actually have a new story on my page right now. It's hopefully going to be good. I've wanted to write it for ages. :)
    July 30th, 2013 at 12:22am
  • Ayesha C

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    awwwww its ended! i really enjoyed it , it was sweet and true and just plain enjoyable. Thankyou for uploading it! you should defo write more stories
    July 29th, 2013 at 11:48pm
  • The Authoress

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    No, I didn't think of 1D at all, but i was surprised that she was blushing at another man! :P OMG I love the latest chapter LOL its toooooooooo cute! <3
    July 27th, 2013 at 06:41am
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    @ Ayesha C
    Walaikumalaisalam!

    Alhamdullilah Ramadan is going well. In not fasting these days for . Reasons... Hahah

    I'm so excited that you like the story!! I think this last chapter is a bit different. I'd love to know your thoughts. And always there's my threat tha I kind of want to end it soon...
    July 26th, 2013 at 07:31pm
  • Ayesha C

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    Tariq is so cute.....lol!

    So sad to hear about the sisters, especially to hear about the one who's not being very encouraging or helpful to the revert, i hope she sorts herself out soon :/

    Yep i'm loving the chapters so far! It makes a fresh change to the common stories Mibba dishes out way too much *1D Fanfics cough cough* hahaha. I only sign in to read your story updates now XD

    Yes Ramadhan is going well actually, its been 2 weeks officially today! Its going scarily fast. No we have about 6 hours between iftar and suhoor, which makes up to about 18 hour fasts, what about you?

    Hope you're well darling!! Salaams. xx
    July 23rd, 2013 at 01:50am
  • BurstYourBubble

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    Yes i am muslim :) and i see that, i actually enjoyed the last chapter the most because it was very reflective and logical :)
    July 21st, 2013 at 05:56am
  • discoveringclouds

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    I just changed the last chapter a bit, haha did you even get that far?

    Just so you know it's a little different now. :)
    July 21st, 2013 at 01:45am
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    @ Ayesha C
    Alhamdullilah. The new sister is having some trouble understanding fasting and praying, and unfortunately another sister has been really not helping her case. The other sister made her promise today she wouldn't fast either. The only that does is make it hard for the new sister while the other sister tries to justify herself. Like the girl actually wanted to fast and pray, she converted to Islam out of her own free will and then a MUSLIM girl is making it hard for her, because she wants to do as little as possible herself.

    But Allah is the Best of Planners and has all the hearts in His hands so we can pray for her. *phew* This has made me really upset. But I know it's hard to be perfect Muslims for us all, and Prophet Muhammad is our perfect example, but we have to keep trying. So if I ever meet that other sister...I really want to have a talk with her to not discourage people when they are trying their best.

    Anyways Ayesha I've got a new chapter up! :) Do let me know if it flows with the rest.

    How are your fasts coming along? I heard in england there are only four hours between iftaar and sehri! May Allah make it easy for you!
    July 21st, 2013 at 01:28am
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    @ BurstYourBubble

    Thank you! I'm glad you like it! I know, there aren't enough actual Muslim stories! That's why I've made it my mission to make a unique story with as much Islam as I can. :)

    I will try my best to! Are you Muslim as well?
    July 21st, 2013 at 01:22am
  • BurstYourBubble

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    Oh i absolutely love this story <3 you know it's just awesome to find a muslim story here =D and its an awesome one, keep it up!
    July 20th, 2013 at 10:18pm
  • Ayesha C

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    dont you dare end it! i need for something to happen, i need more! lol. Also, alhamdulilah for the enw sister who converted, hopefully she'll transition into Islam easily Inshallah =) xxx
    July 16th, 2013 at 08:25pm
  • The Authoress

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    No sorry you can't end it just yet, I need more *casual shrug* sorry! :D loved every chapter! And ameen to your du'a for the new sister who converted!! ♥
    July 15th, 2013 at 10:11am
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    @ Ayesha C
    Khair Mubarak! I'm so glad you like him! Hahaha, and I'm glad you read it after iftaar...hahahah :P I keep mentioning food...it's so bad. hahaha I should be focusing on fasting and adding good ideas into my story. Anything you could suggest about the story would be much appreciated as well!
    July 15th, 2013 at 01:12am
  • Ayesha C

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    just read the updated 5 chapters. Love it! Tariq is so cute/sweet. Good job i read this after iftaar or id be hungry with all the food references! haha, speaking of...Ramadhan Mubarak sister! :*
    July 15th, 2013 at 01:06am
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    @ The Authoress
    In sha Allah. I would love to write more and I am planning the story out.
    July 12th, 2013 at 10:29am
  • The Authoress

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    LOL Sorry, bad bluff. :P but you would be ever so kind to write more! O:-D
    July 11th, 2013 at 10:39am