Disaster's Aid - Comments

LOL Sorry, bad bluff. :P but you would be ever so kind to write more! O:-D

LOL Sorry, bad bluff. :P but you would be ever so kind to write more! O:-D

@ The Authoress
What authorities ;P

They can't get me!! I ain't about that life!!

Haha, we will see!

DON'T END THIS @discoveringclouds OR I WILL CALL THE AUTHORITIES AND MAKE YOU COMPLETE THIS TIED TO A CHAIR! >.<

Oh my gosh! I always love reading your stories. I think this is the best so far. I love taariq. He's so sweet. And I really, really like how you incorporate all the hadiths and that into your stories. It just makes it all the more better.

@ discoveringclouds
Do you mean to say 'I luv you'? Haha, I luv ya too sista <3 The discussion b/w Sarah n her family btw but its fine ^_^

@ Tipsy Returns
What discussion? What did I miss??

I love the comments coming in!!

@ Ayesha C
Hey Ayesha! I owe you one for the comment >.<

@ discoveringclouds
Wait. You didn't discuss the discussion. I was so looking forward to it :( Anyway, hope to see them happily married soon ^_^

ooohhh im getting into this. POST NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!! =) lol

@ discoveringclouds
Woah, now that's too much like Sarah. She better talk straight and Tariq should return. If he doesn't...let's kick him back to her hahahaha Sorry, sorry, I'm just kidding

And you meany! No more update till ANOTHER one comments But I'll be patient cos I'm so nice nice haha Still, update soon, cos if no one takes the liberty to comment, I'll comment instead of all of them! Pinky promise!

@ Tipsy Returns
Really? That's fantastic and so strange! I'm glad these names are familiar.

It better be flattering, I just put another chapter up because you commented, I have only one more chapter that's written...I better get to it! :P
I'll put up the next chapter when someone else comments. :P

Aysha's the beauty of my family, my baby niece @_@

Maybe it's Tariq who was listening to her! That'd be so cool haha! I love this turn of events XD And I was mentioned in the author's note...that's pretty flattering I guess

You knoe this story has so many names I'm familiar with. They'vs all been my ex-classmates, even someone called Tariq. And did I mention I too have a friend called Ayesha! She's the beauty of our school hahaha

@ Tipsy Returns
Another chapter is up because you commented haha!

@ Tipsy Returns
Thank you for your comments! You like this better?! Ahh!! How come, do tell! I should take whatever it is on more often!

I like the name Yasmina too :)

I'll bet they ARE soul mates. Sarah is really adorable <3

I think this is even better than surrendering! And the fourth chapter was the best. So many poetic lines haha Its sweet of Sarah to realize she's bad...I like her already :)

On a sidenote, I loved Aunt Mimi, and of course, Yasmina was the most attractive name...for me that is. Update soon, looking forward to this piece. Its awesome! :D

@ Cerbera.
Yesssss, of course. You've got me pegged.

I'm glad you're enjoying it! Let me know if it remains too vague in the start as I add more chapters. I do want to bring in the details slowly, so you can guess the story a little bit. Does that make sense?

I like arranged marriage stories, so I finally get a chance to write one.. haha

@ Ayesha C
Walaikumalaisalam!

Let me know if it sounds really weird, but I do want to bring in the answers slowly. The idea is to be just all of a sudden be seeing her life, trying to figure her out. Details will be coming....:)

If anything really is too vague, highlight it and I'll work on it!

Hi, so I'm here!
First of all, let me say that I'm honored you write this with my story in mind.
It's different because of the cultural references, but I like that you take advantage of that to tie it with the whole arranged marriage thing but in the modern world. I agree with Ayesha C that the beginning is a bit rushed, but I can't help but feel that the two men will come back somehow. Sara doesn't seem to be a "nice" girl at all, hopefully that will change. Btw, is Tariq like my king or something? You were so excited to see him lol

hey darling! since you mentioned this story i thought id come and check it out for myself. i read all three chapters and i enjoyed it! I was a bit confused at the beginning as i was unsure what was going on, you didn't explain her reason for leading two suitors on in the first place, her background, her name and character etc but then i thought you might leave that for later. loved the strong pathetic fallacy, how you refer to natural disaster and weather related terms to describe what's going on and her feelings. I think the fact that i can relate to the story a lot more because I'm Muslim and Pakistani which makes it better too ;) lol, I'm really enjoying it and I'm gonna subscribe as i'd love to see where it ends up!! good luck with the story sis, Salaam =) xx