The Hunt - Comments

@ T-I-double guh-errrr

Thank you so much for that comment because simple wasn't the style I was going for, I'm normally a lot more detailed! But I hadn't noticed so thank you, I'm currently working on it!!

I like whole look of the layout. The colors all go together well and I love the colors you picked. The picture and background are also really nice.

I really like how you worked the back story into the first chapter. It definitely gets the reader's attention, especially the way you ended the first chapter. I also like the way you named the chapters and added when the chapter takes place under the title. I loved the difference in attitudes about the baby because I'm used to reading stories where its the male character that doesn't want a baby.

Your writing is simple but its good. There might be a few sentences you could rewrite just to make it flow. I didn't notice any big mistakes. Even though this is a Batman fanfic it isn't hard to follow if you aren't a fan so great job on that.

Overall you've got a really good start and I enjoyed reading this!

I really like this, which surprised me, because I'm not usually a fan of these kind of stories. Your layout is nice, maybe a little boring, but still easy to read. Your writing is good, maybe reading over would improve the flow though. To me, some of those lines were very awkward. But that's only my opinion. I couldn't believe she's pregnant! This got a whole lot more exciting when that happened
I love this, good job!

oh my god she's pregnant! haha that was the first thing in my head during chapter 3 and I started grinning like an idiot. I really like this so far, I love catwoman she's the best. I'm really excited to see where this goes!

Awwwww, I think that it is super cute that they are having a baby!

Ohh I looooove the idea of Catwoman and Batman. I wished there was more of them in the last movie and all that but it was so action packed I wasn't surprised that they couldn't fit more in there.

I love this story. I love how you write that Catwoman is having trouble leaving her past in the past, how she was so addicted to stealing that sometimes she's just gotta you know, take some more because that's all she knows. I feel like that would make a lot of sense because that's all she's really ever known.
I'm really upset though, that she doesn't want a baby. That sucks.

I've only seen the movie a couple times, but Batman/Catwoman did appeal to me as an attractive couple. :] I do like Selena's character though and I didn't think she'd settle down so easily. I can't wait to see what you have in store for them after chapter four!

I have never read a Batman/Catwomen fan fic, I have to say that this is pretty good. I loved the first chapter because it really made me want to know more.
I'm interested in seeing where this story is going to go.

A story from Selina Kyle's perspective? Madame you had my curiosity, but now you have my attention!