Derreck - Comments

Omg I love this! This is amazing... it is very powerful and the description is fantastic, and it's really good! I don't know what else to say just awesome! I'm subscribed and intrigued!

This is so, so, so tragically beautiful. This is the kind of story where you feel the sadness deep in your stomach. Wow. The amount of pain and sympathy I feel for Derreck is so unbelieveable, I was almost in tears when I read the chapter with Jake in it. This was so intensely touching and tragic and wow. It's beautiful.

This is incredible! Good job.

Wow, I really am interested in this story. I've just read the prologue and first chapter, but it already is so captivating. I love how it's written in third person, it makes me feel like I'm almost watching a movie with the way you describe things. The layout is really amazing, and it makes the story just that much more touching. That photo...it suits the mood of this story.

Keep up the great work!

This is such a powerful and deep story. It's beautiful in it's dark nature.
The character development is so strong for Derreck. You have a great way of describing things, physical and the emotional aspect as well. My heart breaks for Derreck and I can't wait to read more. Good job!
The layout is super awesome too. The photo is haunting yet it fits so well.

This is emotional, it's strong and the struggled Derreck is going through is something that could relate to what a lot of people are going through now. The pain that his brother shared for his sake, and the careless Derreck is showing is such a dangerous combination that no reader is capable of pulling away from. I hope this story continues because this is a great piece.

this is great so far, can't wait for more!! :)

This sounds really interesting - I'm subscribing. I hope you write more.

I'm intrigued. A short start, but it was very well written. I look forward to reading more!