This chapter was great and I love to see development beteeen family members. I hope her and sawyer get back together and they have that 'bond' again. I can't wait until your next update :)
*gets on knees* I am addicted to this story. It is amazing. I can't even find the right words for it. So oh my god. Please update.... I read from start to the last chapter and I am waiting for more, I literally finished the last chapter a few minutes ago. And I found this story yesterday. Love love love it :) lol
You're bacccckkkkk! <3 <3<3 and so happy you have another story idea, Mibba needs amazing writers like you! I'm excited and sad to see how this one ends, excited because I know you're going to do an amazing job with it and sad because...well....it'll be over ),:
I'm all team Sawyer. I too tackled this whole story rather quickly, and am quite upset there isn't anything more for me to read . Please update soon. From your authors notes it seems you do frequently . :D
I'm not gonna lie: I read this whole story in one night. It's currently 3am & I just finished all the chapters. Can I just say—HOLY CRAP. I absolutely adore this story. The plot is amazing, the action, & descriptions are beyond amazing. This is so addictive. I'm hooked. Someone needs to publish this. I can't even. 90% of me wants Charlie to be with Sawyer, it just seems right. But he needs to stop being so hard on himself all the time. Mistake happen! I'm also concerned: if Charlie had a horrible reaction to his DNA how will they have children in the future if they do end up staying together? 5% of me wants Charlie to be with Jesse & the other 5% wants Jesse to be with Saphira.
Oh man, even I'm torn between Jesse and Sawyer after that chapter! Your little note has got me nervous and excited to read the ending! Although I'm sad that the ending is coming up D:
Okay, so, I started reading this a couple of weeks ago and I have FINALLY caught up. First off, I would like to say when Charlie first met Sawyer, it was adorable. The little note warning her to not take the subway. But when Jesse was walking with her, I instantly developed a sense of hatred towards him because Charlie is SAWYERS girl ahaha. Second, I love Jesse. As the story goes on, my love grew. His friendship and loyalty to Charlie is truly admired. Third, I don't like Saphira. Never have, never will. I also don't particularly like Forrest, although he's a cute kid. The dynamics in each and everyone's character is what makes this story so intriguing no matter how painful it is to read.
Sawyer. That is a name I have never thought would be used in a story. Whenever I hear that name now, I will think of Reapers. And I am totally bummed out about his unfortunate result of now being human. That kind of hurt me... a lot. Charlie - Charlotte. It's not very often you get a red-head main character with sass and shy-ness, and can woman up when needed. That crack in that last chapter is what tied her whole character together. I really hope she will be united with Mandi, and has a nice chat with Fitch. That would be nice, ahah.
I applaud you! I absolutely love this story, the characters, the story-line. It reminds me of multiple movies smooshed into one (not naming those movies). KEEP IT UP! I loveeee it!
Okay, so, I started reading this a couple of weeks ago and I have FINALLY caught up. First off, I would like to say when Charlie first met Sawyer, it was adorable. The little note warning her to not take the subway. But when Jesse was walking with her, I instantly developed a sense of hatred towards him because Charlie is SAWYERS girl ahaha. Second, I love Jesse. As the story goes on, my love grew. His friendship and loyalty to Charlie is truly admired. Third, I don't like Saphira. Never have, never will. I also don't particularly like Forrest, although he's a cute kid. The dynamics in each and everyone's character is what makes this story so intriguing no matter how painful it is to read.
Sawyer. That is a name I have never thought would be used in a story. Whenever I hear that name now, I will think of Reapers. And I am totally bummed out about his unfortunate result of now being human. That kind of hurt me... a lot. Charlie - Charlotte. It's not very often you get a red-head main character with sass and shy-ness, and can woman up when needed. That crack in that last chapter is what tied her whole character together. I really hope she will be united with Mandi, and has a nice chat with Fitch. That would be nice, ahah.
I applaud you! I absolutely love this story, the characters, the story-line. It reminds me of multiple movies smooshed into one (not naming those movies). KEEP IT UP! I loveeee it!
Okay, so, I started reading this a couple of weeks ago and I have FINALLY caught up. First off, I would like to say when Charlie first met Sawyer, it was adorable. The little note warning her to not take the subway. But when Jesse was walking with her, I instantly developed a sense of hatred towards him because Charlie is SAWYERS girl ahaha. Second, I love Jesse. As the story goes on, my love grew. His friendship and loyalty to Charlie is truly admired. Third, I don't like Saphira. Never have, never will. I also don't particularly like Forrest, although he's a cute kid. The dynamics in each and everyone's character is what makes this story so intriguing no matter how painful it is to read.
Sawyer. That is a name I have never thought would be used in a story. Whenever I hear that name now, I will think of Reapers. And I am totally bummed out about his unfortunate result of now being human. That kind of hurt me... a lot. Charlie - Charlotte. It's not very often you get a red-head main character with sass and shy-ness, and can woman up when needed. That crack in that last chapter is what tied her whole character together. I really hope she will be united with Mandi, and has a nice chat with Fitch. That would be nice, ahah.
I applaud you! I absolutely love this story, the characters, the story-line. It reminds me of multiple movies smooshed into one (not naming those movies). KEEP IT UP! I loveeee it!