July 3rd, 2014 at 06:52pm
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Oh my god! Oh my god it's back! YES!
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love this story, I really do, I like the characters and the lengthy chapters an all the suspense! I'm so happy and glad you updated! I'm excited to see where this go and that girl is a HDRHSSXZ! Don't fall for it Sawyer! DONT DO IT!
I'll just be here. . . waiting patiently for the next update.
Your writing is absolutely amazing, I can't stress that enough. I love your style so much, and the way you describe everything is just so skillful. I could easily see this as a published book. I love how you've developed Charlie's character in such a believable and impressive way. And Sawyer is awesome of course. Oh! And the concept of this story in general is awesome, I've been searching for a unique and interesting story like this for awhile, and on a whim I started yours and I was sucked in from the first chapter. It has become something much more than I expected from Mibba. All the characters have depth and originality, as does the plot, which is something 90% of stories on Mibba lack.
Anyways, I think I've rambled on about how much I LOVE this story enough for one comment! I'm dying to read the next chapter, so I hope you update soon! <3