Reaper - Comments

I want Charlie to go destroying mail boxes with baseball bat while driving by in a car, but I'm pretty sure that's not going to happen

Kuddos to being able to write that so beautifully! And what a cliffhanger at the end! Can't wait for the next update :)

That was beautifully written!

It was not that bad. Lol good job. Can't wait for the next one

So excited to see two updates after being away for so long!

Oh parent drama. Don't worry about the sex scene. If you feel like you can't write one try reading a story that has one and go from there. That's what I did. Best of luck

Take your time. Can't wait for the next chapter

Take your time. Can't wait for the next chapter

Take your time. Can't wait for the next chapter

What.
The.
Wait what?

I re-read the story not too long ago and I remember the mentioning of Omegas, I knew they had to tie into the story somehow but I was never expecting THIS. THIS!!! This was completely unexpected and crazy, CRAZY. Chase.the.sun you are a genius!

I knew they hade to be mates aswell, I was so hoping and suspected it had to be true when she felt that pain, but she felt it because his Reaper part was dying! THAT BREAKS MY HEART. Then again I'm so glad he's only half because if he had died, I would have just cried.

And her recognizing he loves her by being protective. THAT JUST WARMED MY HEART.

But come on Charlie, remember the part where you're brother mentioned they made you into a weopan! WHY DON'T YOU FREAK OUT OVER THAT!

What crazy, mind blowing things do you have in store? I'll just be waiting, right here. . .

More please

Wow! I just discovered this story and could not stop reading it! I literally read all thirty nine chapters in one sitting today xD i love this story and i can't wait to see what happens! Please keep updating! Gosh I just love your writing style, to me it actually sounds like a proffesional writer, my writing always sounds like it's written by a child, but your language is so eloquent :) sorry rambling. Loving the story, keep up all the good work! :D

Whaattt?? Every time I think I know where the story is going you completely surprise me! Such an OMG moment in that last chapter, can't wait to see how part 3 goes!!

I like how Charlie took a step back and acknowledges how much she's been through because you also reminded me all the obstacles and events she's come across. Charlie has been through so much. A LOT. But of course she's one tough cookie and I love that.

When she stood up against Isis I was so excited, but of course I knew she would because she's Charlie and good always wins.

Then you threw me for a loop, and I'm still looping.

First with her brother, then her parent's real business. The fact she felt Sawyer's pain has me wondering. But then you brought up that he's not entirely human and my mind is just hifgbrbgrebhbbhjebibfg.

I don't know where this is going, I don't know, can't, won't even try to figure out what's going to happen next.

JUST DO IT, LET ME EAT IT ALL WITH MY EYES.

So, I'll just be sitting hear, eager to see what you have planned.

Whatttttt

Love the story. It's really good. Can't wait for the next chapter for part three

I was so nervous when Sawyer got shot! And hunters?! What a great twist! Can't wait to read more about that, should be incredibly interesting. Another thing I'm curious to read more about is the "connection" that was brought up between Sawyer and Charlie in this chapter! As always, I can't wait to read more!

Oh my...

Gah! Such a suspenseful ending once again! Can't wait to read what happens next and how her brother got to her, and where is Sawyer's pack, and why is Sawyer acting all funny?? So many questions! Update soon please! <3

This story is one of the best I have read in a very long time! I can't wait for the next chapter!!