Okay, so I prolly should leave this on Pieces, but I'm not. I read all of that one and the first chapter of this and all I have to say is holy shit!
I can not wait to read more and I gotta say I love it. I haven't found a story that made me wanna read it straight through in one night in a long time.
This is really amazing and as already stated, I can not wait to read more.
I don't know what to say. I finished reading the whole prequel in a night and damn, my feelings are all over the place. I can't wait for more. I'm dying here.
A year, goddaaaaaaamn! Violet's probably either holding on for dear life or she's borderline dead. I just really hope she gets back to Zacky! The poor man's a mess!
Oh God! Poor Zack!! He's really suffering without violet isn't he? . It seems as though guilt and fear for violet has eaten him up from the inside so he's totally consumed.
Please update soon as this has me totally gripped already!
I'm seconding the layout issue, though for some reason I suspect part of the problem I'm seeing is just that Safari hates life and therefore tends to try to make its users hate life too. But it's not a big issue, so please don't stress over it, I just wanted to make sure someone did validate that there is an issue for at least some readers. I blame Mibba's new layout maker, honestly. I have not been able to create a workable layout since the change. -.-' Update my ass.
ANYWAYS, I know I just stole forever of your time by making you read the comment I left on the prequel, but I simply could not justify not commenting on this and telling you how absolutely excited I am for the coming chapters, and how honored I feel to be a part of your waiting fan base. I'm so happy to get to be able to comment with the chapters this time around, so I can hopefully better convey how they impact me individually. (:
That said, I am officially withholding my recommendation on this story until we get further in. I am sure I will love this story, and I am sure it will be just as much a masterpiece as the prequel, but I feel like recommending it based solely on my love for the prequel would be cheapening the merits of this story itself, you know? I just wanted to make sure you understood why I wasn't recommending yet.
First chapter now, yes? Time lapse was an obviously intelligent decision, and it's already so absolutely fascinating and completely engrossing (and I'm totally using that word wrong, I know it, but I can't be bothered to stop typing this review long enough to look up the definition) just to see what a year's time has done to Zacky, so I can't even imagine what it has done to Vi. I'm going to go ahead and blame my shameless love of your portrayal of Zacky in the prequel as my reasoning for being more interested in how he's been through everything and more concerned about him than her, when she's so obviously in more danger... but, I'm a woman. I can't resist loving his character. That said, I've never been so interested in and concerned with where a time lapse has left a main female character, so you should know that you seriously did a marvelous job creating Violet's character. I really, really do care about her, and that honestly never happens.
Now, I'm going to keep this comment short, since I really went overboard with my comment on the prequel, so I want to end with saying that I absolutely adore the "What ever happened to Violet Kennedy?" line. It's telling, it's thought-provoking, and it's hauntingly beautiful. I absolutely love it.
Instantly subscribed and on the edge of my seat to see what happens. <3
A YEAR!!!??? Poor Violet, god I can only imagine how damaged and scared she would be now. Please update soon, I need to know what has happened to Violet, I grew fond of her.
A YEAR??? omg O.O Zack, don't you dare drinking your life away. Violet would beat the shit out of you, bro.
Also, idk if it's only on my computer but your layout appears kind of wrong here. I mean, whenever I open your story the text is too far right and I have to roll the page to the right so I can read it. Again idk if it's only here or if it's for everyone, but I just felt like I had to say so you could check it (:
anyway, you already know I'm in love with this story right? Can't wait to read more! xoxo