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  • shortygirl

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    Derek is so jealous! Though I'm rooting for him.
    July 11th, 2014 at 09:30pm
  • psuche

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    @ mrsbellaray

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    Thanks so much for sticking with my story! You guys make it worth writing! :) I'd also like to know if you guys would read my original fiction if I posted it up here? Feel free to be as honest as you like!
    July 10th, 2014 at 10:35pm
  • mrsbellaray

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    yaay! i missed this so much! thanks for uploading this! xx
    July 10th, 2014 at 06:12pm
  • Albluerose

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    Love the update :)
    July 10th, 2014 at 02:57am
  • TheCrimsonRose

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    Please update this again! I love this story so far! Very Happy
    March 20th, 2014 at 02:33am
  • okwhatever14

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    Update soon puleeeeeeeez!
    And yes, season 3B does look scary as hell. I'm worried about Stiles.
    December 20th, 2013 at 02:12am
  • ReadyToFall22

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    I REALLY LOVE THIS AND ITS GIVING ME FEELS AND SHE NEEDS TO END UP ITH DEREK PLEASE
    December 16th, 2013 at 03:44am
  • laceyvengeance

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    I hope Derek does fight for Emilia..not literally of course..but still..c: ..I mean, I love Stiles and everything, but he's a bit too young for her...plus, like she said, she will always love Derek...and that would more than likely bug the shit out of Stiles..
    November 24th, 2013 at 07:52pm
  • shortygirl

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    He'll be damned if he looses her again.
    November 21st, 2013 at 05:16am
  • LadyMJtheDreamer

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    I love your story so far, love. And as for my advice, I agree with the people below me. Go for Derek. Can't wait to read more.
    October 6th, 2013 at 05:27am
  • NeverXUnderstoodXIt

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    I would prefer to see Derek get the girl. I love Stiles, but I don't think Emilia is the girl for him.
    October 5th, 2013 at 08:13am
  • avenged angel

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    Derek all the way Very Happy
    October 1st, 2013 at 06:14am
  • shortygirl

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    Loved the update
    September 30th, 2013 at 04:43am
  • shortygirl

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    Probably not the best time for stiles to be visiting....
    September 28th, 2013 at 10:15pm
  • shortygirl

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    Loved the update.
    July 23rd, 2013 at 06:01am
  • Alejandra1

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    Please update soon :D
    July 13th, 2013 at 06:50am
  • Snow.White.Queen.

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    Here from Le Comment Swap.
    So firstly, the layout is nice, not the easiest to read, but it's pretty, I'll give you that.
    I have one slight problem though, you have huge chunks of writing which are a little tedious to read at times, and then smaller paragraphs only a few sentences long. I think you should try to even that out a bit. I think the writing itself is good though, Peter really seems crazy to me tehe I think this is a really great story, waiting for more. :]
    July 9th, 2013 at 11:39am
  • laceyvengeance

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    I kind of suspected Emilia to be Derek's mate...c: ...too bad she's giving him what he gave her in the past..but I honestly don't think it's intentionally, unlike when he did it.... -.-

    Oh & something I forgot to mention in the comment I posted on your profile, that GOD Momma McCall is still alive! & that it was just an illusion...& when Stiles was crying when Scott was trying to commit suicide, it made it that much worse for me..so many tears came from my eyes... :C
    July 9th, 2013 at 05:33am
  • psuche

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    @ shortygirl
    Ill say he can smell them on her, but he doesn't realize it yet
    July 9th, 2013 at 05:08am
  • shortygirl

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    Does Derek know that she's hanging out with stiles and Scott? He does need to give her some time though.
    July 9th, 2013 at 04:35am
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