I'm not a Twilight fan..at all...but because you did enter the Mibbaween candy bowl with this i really gave it a chance and i'm glad i did. I'm on chapter two and i'm so glad you chose this story for me to read. it's so well written and descriptive. That Micah character crawled my blood...talk about can't take a hint. I love how the conversations flow into one another....and i like Quinn...this is a great piece of work...
OK, wow! First off, I love the layout and banner. Second, you've got some serious editing skills with that story trailer! You're the first person I've seen here on Mibba that has included a trailer to go with the story and I think that's cool. This whole story brings me back to my tween days when I was really into Twilight and I even tried writing a twilight fanfiction myself at one point haha. Overall, I love the dialogue, Quinn's character so far, the details, everything.