June 27th, 2013 at 05:17am
This is such an awesome idea! It's so unique and interesting and GOD DAMNIT IT SENT BEFORE I FINISHED
and I love all supernatural type things so this is perfect! I love the way you write it flows so nicely and your descriptions are perfect and I love the main character, she's such a bad ass. She knows she's going to get into trouble but she does it anyway because she's trying in her own way to do the right thing. The atmosphere you create is great too. Basically you are an awesome writer! c: The ending of the first chapter is so dramatic omg.
The second chapter's awesome and I think you've set up a story that can go on so many directions and I'm really excited to find out what happens :D Again your descriptions and overall way of writing is just perfect I'm in love with it and this story and I can't wait to see who the other looper is and what they have to say!
This was brilliant.
Absolutely amazing and beautiful and I love it.
The idea is great and your description is perfect. Your grammar and punctuation and everything else was amazing too.
I always love your writing.
<3
Subbed and Recced, my beautiful writing genius!
(I typed subbed and my phone corrected it to rubbed, haha)