No Strings Attatched - Comments

One thing I want to mention is you need to start a new paragraph/line when a different person is speaking. Makes it much easier to read There were also parts of the text that didn't quite belong and disrupted the flow a little and I felt the sex scene at the beginning was a bit too awkward for me to read, felt quite rushed. The plot idea's good though and it'll be interesting to see how it goes!

Ahhh! I just started reading this and I love it....(:

@Pigface84

@Cupcake Princess

@Loveless1

I think that I am going to make the next chapter in his POV. Thank you all for sharing your insight! (:

@pandas!

Ohmygosh thank you so much! I'm excited that my story has had such an effect on you. Thank you so much for commenting! (: and don't worry.. ive got big plans for this story.

Love to know what he was thinking. Great Story.

legit this story has made me re-think my current life choices.....by the way don't tell me this story is about to end i'll die! its just too damn good

shouldn't*

She should call his girlfriend a slut, it's not her fault

@DaisyBelladonna

First off, thank you for commenting (: second, you got the reaction I was hoping for in a new reader (: the chaos and sporaticness of the events in the story are supposed to make you feel lost. I write it that way intentionally. You're suposed to be confused as to what is happening : to further emphasize the feelings in a casual sex relationship. The confusion..the heartbreak .. the randomness. You responded greatly. Thank you for that (:

As far as the spacing, I didn't even realize I was doing that. Stupid wordpad xD thank you!

I hope you liked it and subscribed for more if you did! Thanks again! (:

Do it in his view it sounds like fun please do it

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Okay, I like the direction you are heading in, but I felt like I was thrown in a little too quickly. I got a little confused as to what was going on and next thing I knew, they were hooking up at his place. It would also be helpful if you would start a new line when another person spoke.
Okay, off the heavy and to the positives. You seem like an excellent writer. Your descriptions are good and I can imagine the people very well. The story seems very promising.

@ lovely205

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it (:

this last chapter went hard I love it !!

I think a chapter in Ben's POV would be awsome

@ bxgurl95

I'm actually posting it right now! Hope you all like it ! (:

@ Midnights_Anthem
Can't wait

@ moshi_
Thank you ! I should have an update out later on tonight, because I have work in a few hours (: I'm going to start writing it now. If I'm lucky, I should have it out before I have to leave (:

I love this story! Update soon! Can't wait to see what's coming!

Ahhh okay I just loves you all. Thank you so much for commenting ! :D

@ Pigface84
awhe ! -cries- thank you ! xD

@ bxgurl95
ahh, but that is the beauty of it my dear. She is drunk, and probably doesn't even know what she is doing right now and probably won't remember it in the morning. I just can't wait for you guys to see this plot twist coming up. It's gonna blow your minds :D

@ Cupcake Princess
Ohhmygosh thank you! thank you so much! :o

@ jaseykay
Yay! I'm happy you like it ! (: Thank you !

This is probably the best story that ive read in a while

@ Midnights_Anthem
Lol yea I do a lot of commenting :)