No Strings Attatched - Comments

I love when writers get Ito their stories and like/dislike some of their characters as well. When you write them as really propel and not trying I make everyone the good/bad guy it's more believable and enjoyable. I can't believe that bitch! Grrr

@ bxgurl95

Omg really? I'm glad you liked it. And yay warm bodies !

@ Pigface84

Fuck what? What are we fucking? xD -oristhisjustanemotionalstatement- Hmm..

@ Lady A

Awe ! I'm happy you had a reaction! That's what I'm aiming for (: I'm happy the chapter sufficed.

@ AuToPaNiC

Working on the next one right now !!

@ green_tea.

I know. Rhian is a bitch /: and we shall see..

@ jaseykay

After finding nothing on that emotion on urban dictionary, I have come to the conclusion that it is in fact a unique expression. You should be honored xD

Qwwrtuoovsfvdgbvdhbv D': is my emotion right now.

Omg I got chillssss! I can't believe she did that, the bitch! I hope the baby's ok ;(

Please do update soon! I need to know if everything is okay! o.o

You surpassed my expectations with chapter. I love it but I kinda got emotional when she started bleeding. Omg didn't have control over the tears lol

Well Fuck.

Oh my god I actually got a pain in my stomach when she kicked her anyway. Live the drama though lol

And love warm bodies

@ BlueEyedAngel2

I'm happy you decided to share your insight! (: Yes, I hate Rhian too. She thinks she has some sort of claim on Ben...

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^^ How I feel about Rhian. If anyone gets this reference I LOVE YOU xD

I have been reading a while and I'm sorry I haven't commented I really love this story. I really really hate Riahn. I hope she at least gets arrested!!!!

@ de-mentophobia

thank you so much, I'm flattered that you appreciate the balance I try to maintain (:

@ Lady A

so sweet, thank you! I'm so happy you enjoy it !

@ Give me Therapy...

I just posted the next chapter. Thank you for commenting ! (: I hope it lives up to your expectations (:

I hope you update soon, I'm hooked on this story! Everything just took me by surprise and I can't wait to see what happens next! :D

Amazing story. I do love the conflict between the two lovers, and how deeply hurt Ben is. The background story really added a lot of depth to his character and the way I saw him. Fantastic story, can't wait until you update again.

This is really good, I love the fact that you just don't focus on the sex scenes yet you show some empathy towards the /meaning/ of the story, it's like a mixture of good and bad but instead it's sex and love, You know how to keep your boundaries, great story, Just a tip, a few spelling errors here and there but be sure to proof read to get it successful and professional, overall, great job!

@jaseykay

The funny thing is, I actually didn't intend for Carla to be pregnant while I was writing the chapter with the dream. And then I was like hmm.... I know, i share the same Ben feels. Poor Ben ): lol I have a pretty epic plan for these next couple of chapters. Stay tuned! (:

I knew she was pregnant because of the dream. And damn poor Ben :(

@IOwnYouBiatch

Ahh thank youu :D haha , I'm glad that you like it !

@bxgurl95

Yeah.. I felt like it was kind of a little filler chapter. Now that the cats out of the bag about Carla and Ben, the major feels are coming up xD

And I know, she's an excellent writer, and the story is just amazing. I'm glad some of my readers are checking her out! (:

@ Carpe diem;

I'm going to referr you down to a previous comment that I made, explaining why I write the story the way I do. It's all intentional .

"First off, thank you for commenting (: second, you got the reaction I was hoping for in a new reader (: the chaos and sporaticness of the events in the story are supposed to make you feel lost. I write it that way intentionally. You're suposed to be confused as to what is happening : to further emphasize the feelings in a casual sex relationship. The confusion..the heartbreak .. the randomness. You responded greatly. Thank you for that (:

As far as the spacing, I didn't even realize I was doing that. Stupid wordpad xD thank you!

I hope you liked it and subscribed for more if you did! Thanks again! :) "

Like it mentions, I write it this way on purpose. Behind every writers style is an ulterior motive. You're supposed to feel awkward, because that's how Carla feels in the flashback when Ben asks her to delve into this lifestyle . You also reacted perfectly, and thank you (:

As far as the line spacing... Word pad does it to me -.- even when I go in to mibba and fix it, it still looks the same, and I have no clue how to fix it /: lol .

Thank you for commenting and sharing your insight. It means a lot (:

I though she was going to be pregnant or Rhian was going to be pregnant. This chapter seemed a little more rushed than the others. I understand that he's traumatized but he needs to talk to Carla or someone about what he's thinking.
That's crazy! I've been reading ---Saevus Desiderium --- for the past few days and I'm freakin hooked (it got me from the title).